All Comments on 'CSI: The Hot Tub'

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So I guess this will start a flurry of detectives jumping into the hot tub so they can solve cases!

Fun story and interesting to watch the progress of the case.

Regards, DJ

Nice read DG, I liked the twists and turns. Didn't understand why it was in clebreties. Still loved the story.

An avid reader.

This story should have been in Loving wives. Don't know what happened. Hope you still enjoyed the story.

Sorry for the error.

DG Hear

I wrote to Literotica and also put in a re-edit to this story. I only changed the catagory. It diffenately should be in Loving Wife. Let me know if you want to read more CSI stories by Jim and Bobbie.

DG Hear

Thanks for another great story in the ‘Who Done It’ style! Clever plot and very believable characters make it worthy of being rated with the TV CSI 'masterpieces'. I, for one, am certainly looking forward to many more adventures of Bobbie and Jim? Well done, DG!

Excellent writing. The plot was great, and the dialogue, also.

Of course I would like to see more in the Jim and Bobbie series. Love this type of story.

Bring on more, DG!

loved the plot and the twists and turns in it...would love to read more like this...

Excellent story and plot. Liked the story-line. 5 +++++

BJ