All Comments on 'Conquered: Spoils of War Ch. 05'

"I think I'd quite like it, however non-incharacter it is, for her to give him a dry slap."

In fact, I think I'd quite like slapping a number of people were it not illegal. One might be put in jail, etc.

I've slapped some people--my da for one. And he deserved it. Or did I just imagine this? See "The Playboy Of The Western World" and his "I killed my da."

He--the playboy--is a hero. Until his undead Da shows up.

F. Prose and "s&m"--I meant--only--her intro to "Nine & A Half Weeks." I read this--her intro--because I admire her so much. But what the hell--D. Merkin and etc., were all off on (mild?) versions of this stuff, so--

I think this has been a major--lately--fad in women's lit.

I'll say I'm a lesbian (no--won't git out that way) or a castrate (sp?)--whatever--to git out of this. And still be chic.

terrible symbol. (Anne Sexton and all that.)

This just bores me.

I've lived in the south most of my early life, including Mobile, AL.

Of course seafood was a big deal.

And it just was "exotic."

And if anyone wants to act like it's "natural" to eat raw oysters, I just don't think so.

Any more than it's "natural" to eat chitlins.

when there is absolutely no reason to.

That's just how they are.

Of course, they might write a sestina.

They might--

or they might kneel in the street and pray like Christopher Smart.

But the good people, and there were quite a few (look it up), forgave him. Christopher Smart.

His pomes are even part of the Episcopal Church's song and prayer book.

Sorta like Blake--adoration of animals, songs of innocence and further innocence

Because "He" was Faulkner, and she was His daughter.

(Just joking.)

And after Faulkner, she gave up on their ilk (sp?) forever.

I love the voices of women writers, poets. How I've looked for them. To hear women--other than Sharon Olds--speak our desire and love for men. That sounds formal. Sorry. And to be honest. And not afraid of political crit.

That we are past having to do this knee-jerk hate males things--

we can just enjoy them, like eating oysters, or chocolate (sp?), or whatever ...

like eating raw oysters and drinking Dixie beer early in the morning after getting off a Greyhound bus to New Orleans from Tucson where we were grad students in poetry and phil.

This really happened. In my real life. I can die happy.

(But not if I hadn't had my ...)

"THE MEMORY WILL SHINE." B&S

where girls/women can say

WE LOVE MEN

"The memory will shine." Belle & Sebastian"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mwxjJ4xBsnY

"In a modern world where ... women say, 'I don't need you,' I say, "I desperately need men' ... It takes a man in me to tell you that I'm on my knees for men."

postfemi--

gorg us!

rabbitgirl

"... might like to have his massive length driven up her noble and unopened ass. maybe if he's nice, he lets her lube him up by taking him in her mouth-or her pussy, then he opens her anally. she might like to really be fucked well in her little tight tush.more... "

There's no reason to believe she thinks her--SUPPOSEDLY--unopened ass is "noble."

So just shut the fuck up.

Before she sticks something you don't (?) want up yours.

just open wide--

watch him play in the rain--

a magical adventure for you

for such a very, very long time--

it's magic for you--

Totoro--"

it may seem like a dream--

things are not what they seem--

it's magic for you--

rain tumbles down, the bus is late

suddenly--he--is by your side--

just open wide

now begins a new adventure for you--

and you'll be with Totoro--"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OpMVGgwfMcA

as "woman" is a mystery, a symbol in a lot of literature by males--

(ok--i'm being romantic)

being made a symbol of sorts is an honor

this thing, creature is THAT important

girls love mysteries

especially sexual mysteries

(we're VERY smart)

that males as evil as they inherently are

...

i won't do them the honor of saying

(you know--that thing about sacre words)

girl-rabbit

whatever.

I am not one to mince words.

and open their hearts."

to Totoro

Cute! And don't disdain "cute," you femme Neanderthals.

Some sex toys from say--Japan--are as cute to play with as Totoro. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0096283/

Found at "Lit.:" "Iroha"

Pastel toys as cute as some girly anime.

No, these pretty things don't appear to be very aggressively dominant, but are no less desirable for this. Put one next to your computer. Fondle it to relax.

It's a pet.

might like to have his massive length driven up her noble and unopened ass. maybe if he's nice, he lets her lube him up by taking him in her mouth-or her pussy, then he opens her anally. she might like to really be fucked well in her little tight tush.

I think I'd quite like it, however non-incharacter it is, for her to give him a dry slap. Having said that - this story is great!

It's not that she has no dignity left. It's that she can't resist the feelings that he gives her. And why should she?

I found Wishfulthinking in the non consent section... This story is AMAZING

Obviously you've never experienced passion. It's pretty impossible to deny someone who evokes passion in you. She can't help her reaction to him, and even then she holds onto her dignity. Idiot.

i like the fact she has no dignity left

now, this is just pissing me off.

you write really well, but I cant read this story anymore, because that girl just has no dignity left.

Hot and awesome and well told.

i hope you continue the story soon. I would like to know what happens next...will she finally give in? will he admit that he loves her? you have officially become my favorite writer on here.

She keeps going on about her pride but everytime he touches her, she melts in arms.

i know that you said you would update, but pleeeease put up another chapter soon!

In twenty days, it will be three years since this story has been last updated...

and today it has been 5 years, 3 months and 13 days since this storyline began...

and you know what else?

I still wait with delirious anticipation! hahaha

On a more serious note, wishfulthinking i thought that you were going to post ch. 06 in february? Please put your fans out of their misery!!!

I hope that the next post comes soon!

Waiting ever so faithfully,

Cinta xxO

please keep writing i cant wait to finish this story and find out the fate of princess jolie, king arik, and their child! please please please finish the story. i will keep checking back for updates!

Surely there is at least 5 more chapters that are going to be written. I don't want to be saying "did Jolie admit she loved Arik and not just lust" Did Arik finally realize that he's in love with Jolie"

The crowd has spoken. "WE WANT MORE"

Aren't you working on one?? Please, please, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a really great story, it puts me in mind of Johanna Lindsey's 'Warrior Woman' stories. It is well written and makes you want to continue reading, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Wow! My My My! You know how to write a story girlfriend! Dominant males are my favorite! I just want to respond to the other readers complaining about Arik. Arik is a KING! No one has or ever will deny him, not in any manner. He has total control over his people and full respect from his warriors solidifying his power. Yes, Arik is a total frickin arrogant bastard, And he dosen't even know it! Jolie is an anomoly. She resists him(in her way) Arik has Never encountered this before. He knows he will never tire of her, hence the Slave neckless... which tells everyone who protects her. It is obvious he loves her... and he will love her in His Own Way... the way a KING who has Never been in Love before. I think when Jolie's baby is born she could again challenge Arik over the slave system/ marriage issue and ask him "what will happen to me if you die?"

I too come and reread hoping that there will soon be an update!

So i saw that you said you would update the last chapter within the month so i keep reading and rereading this hoping that i'll look at that lovely yellow icon will be there telling me that it's up!

So please...pretty pretty pretty please...I'm dying to know...please update soon!

As all the others have written Please let there be an end to this wonderful story

Pleeeaaasssseeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Finish the story. Perhaps you have written it in novel form??? I will look for it and buy them all, if you will just tell us the title.

on your bio page you said a new chapter would be up within the month so hopefully soon?

Keep up the great work! xx

dont leave us hanging!

I loved your story and hope one day it gets finished, It's one of the best I have read. ever.

PLESE Please PRETTY PLEASE finish this story! I love all of your stories, but this one is the best and not knowing how it ends is way too disturbing!

I loved your story very much. I enjoyed the characters that you developed very much. I felt Jolie's emotions so well after she was captured due to the amazing characterization and writing. The plot line is amazing. Yet, I agree with the other people, who posted comments. I wish that you update this story. You have many comments and fans, who are eager for an update. If you do not believe you will finish a story, then perhaps no post it.

received, I wonder if this'll make any difference. I found this story today and read it all in one go. It's a beautiful story and I thank you for writing it.

I'm waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter, just like the rest of these people. I know I won't be disappointed!

I love this genre, and am trying my hand at writing in it as well, but I must say, I'll never be able to beat yours! An offical fan, Lillian. ~KR.

I love this story. Please finish it!!!

This story is amazaing. You just have to finish it. I can't wait to hear the end. It's so good. I hope you complete it one day. :)

All begging you to update this story! Please! We love the story, please continue! It is the best fantasy story on this site! Can you give us a time limit or something?

I am also waiting on the rest of the story. I love to write stories too. If you don't mind some input. I think you should start the next chapter out with a cause and effect. Cause he took her back from her home world. Her sister and his brother reaction was. Because we all would like to know if the sister ever found out about her being the breeding love slave. Will she try to save her sister by putting brother against brother to get her back or still her again. When will he find out his true feeling for her are love. When will she know he want to marry her because he loves her. If you would answer all these question in your next chapter. I will dance at your wedding. lol. Once again wonderful story

This is a very well-written story. Good plot line, grabs ahold of the reader's attention and wraps you up in it. However, it is not fair to leave it up here when it's been up unfinished for 2 years. Please finish it or take it down until you can! (I'd rather you finish it! :-D)

Please you have to go on that is pure cruelty leaving us hanging like that.Have to know what happens but anyway beautiful story thanks a bunch

loved the story but when will we hear the rest of the story? you should really continue because it's really great!

We have to have more. C'mon. Please?

hey ur stories r good but wotz the use when u don ever finish them, itz not fair 2 the readers to get them hooked on them & leave us hanging with no updates 4 years, either post stories u think u'll finish writing or don bother posting at all,sorry 'bout the harsh comments, no offense meant, jus frustrated as i've been waiting 4 updates 4 more than a year....

this story, it is great to have you back but we have to know what happens with jolie and arik!

I am absolutely a fan of this story and every once in a while i check to see for new additions...sadly..there is none...oh jolie what a confusing torture...arik is just a well defined character, great job!! Like the rest...I wait for the continuation.

This is by far the best story I have read on this site. Yet, I don't quite understand the timeline. Was Jolie captured for 3 or ~several~ months? It was probably just a typo, but I wondered just the same. I'm just being picky, so I'll try to wait patiently for the continuation of this story.

p.s. Maybe Liana can threaten Jolie's life, which finally opens Arik's eyes to how much he respects and loves Jolie. I'll settle for anything at this point, but I wanted to write out my appreciation for this story. Bye.

This is by far the best story I have read on this site. Yet, I don't quite understand the timeline. Was Jolie captured for 3 or ~several~ months? It was probably just a typo, but I wondered just the same. I'm just being picky, so I'll try to wait patiently for the continuation of this story.

p.s. Maybe Liana can threaten Jolie's life, which finally opens Arik's eyes to how much he respects and loves Jolie. I'll settle for anything at this point, but I wanted to write out my appreciation for this story. Bye.

First The Novice, then Vampire Seduction, and now Conquered!! Why have you left so many stories unfinished, all at pivotal moments in the story? UGH...you make me so angry and anxious at the same time. I think you've written the best stories on this site, so please please please finish this story.

love this story so passionate please finish this story, I can't get enough.

Please please please finish this. A truly wonderful tale that deserves a conclusion... LOVED IT!!!!

Arik bow down to Jolie. He's such an ignorant arse. I wish you would continue this story, so if you can-if you are there-continue!

when FANTASTIC stories aren't finished!

plz i enjoyed thde story soooooooo much plz hurry with the next chapters PLZ!!!!

im joining all the others comments of PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this. It isnt finished and i would love to see it done

This story significantly improved with each chapter! It would be so great to see you finish it! :-)

What happened? Why aren't you finishing this???

What have you been doing with your life? Finish it or take it down. You're giving ppl hope by keeping it up! Argh!

are you ever going to finish this story or going to do as countless others have and leave it hanging without an ending..??? please do add more, finish it. it would be truly a great story if only it had an ending...

I love the stories. I just would like to see Jolie and Arik both come to see that they love each other.

We are all in need of a befitting end to this story . You have a gift. So PLEASE, PLEASE, continue sharing with us.

This is the second time I read this story and I absolutely love it. But I really really need to know the end. Please will you finish it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

WT please continue this piece! I really think this is the best story I have ever read in this site. l love your work! I keep on coming back here hoping that you've continued it. Please put me out of my misery and finish this great story.

i looked at all your submission dates and they seems so spaced (like half a year or so). Will you be continuing this one? i go back to innocent pawn all the time b/c i know its ended. i love the men you create in your stories

Anxiously waiting for the next instalment!

I agree with every other comment... please continue!!! The story has no closure yet!

It seems to me that it's getting harder and harder to get to a conclusion where the king accepts that Jolie is actually a person (that he might even love) and not an object. Even the marriage he has planned doesn't change this, since he does not allow her to refuse. Ending the story here is definitely preferable to letting him have his way without accepting her.

From the first chapter I was glued to the computer screen. I have to know whether the king will change or will she give in, or some variation of the two. Have a heart and give us another chapter.

I'm stunned that your series is so incredibly erotic without seeming to be only about intimacy. You clearly have quite a talent for the written word. From all the comments I've read, I see that I am not the only one hoping (really really hard) that you would make more installments available. I've never contributed a comment before - very private & cautious, but I wanted to convey my appreciation for your work & encourage you to delight your audience again.

yes you must finish this story its absolutely wonderful and i keep checking online for it......

...since this story was updated! AND I JUST FOUND IT TODAY (12/30/07) Well, almost two years....is this story still in your archives somewhere?? (you should hear a hint of whine in my voice)

It is an awesome story so far. I love the way the conflict has unfolded. But I hate the way it has been left! You would think that Arik wanting to marry her was the key to the HEA but it's obviously not!!!! I want to know what happens next!

I think that you should make a new years' resolution to continue this story...

this is my absolute fav. story!!! if there is more please continue!

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! THIS IS NOT FAIRR! WE NEED TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS. PULEASE!

Please where is the next chapter

what the hell happens next??? i wanna know!!!! please finish writing the story...pReTtY pReTtY pLeAsE...

Busy - busy - busy but is there any way you can finish this story. Once a month I check this board to find out if you have added any chapters. Please give us another chapter or finish this compeling story. I want to know what's going to happen (I know happily ever after) but I want to know the road you choose for them.

it would be nice if there was another chapter, I would love to read Kaline's story also.

I was reading your story for the second time, please can't you finish it, I can't wait until you do!!!

Just read this wonderful story of yours and realized it's a WIP. I'm begging you, please continue this story or my heart will be aching for Jolie forever.

Yours truly,Connie

Your newest fan

Just read this wonderful story of yours and realized it's a WIP. I'm begging you, please continue this story or my heart will be aching for Jolie forever.

Yours truly,Connie

Your newest fan

YOu simply must continue thise story...it's amazing I can't wait till you finally put up another chapter!!

Please say there will be more I really love this story..

Wonderful, hope there will be another chapter.

Wonderful, hope there will be another chapter.

what happens next?! you have to continue with this story!

Oh Please do continue this tale, it is fantastic

I keep returning to see a continuation of this story...no pressure but this is the best LE story and it must keep going!!! Happy writing.

I'm so happy to hear that you are in a writing mood again. I can only hope that this story line is at the top of your list for updates!!

Please dont leave us hanging. This is a really good story. Please continue.

This story is AMAZING!!! Please finish it!!

i really hope this is not the last chapter .i'd really love to see what happens next

Almost but not quite, so please take just a little more time to fulfill the need of all of your adoring fans with at least one more chapter? It's such a breath-taking story. You're an amazing writer. We'll be waiting with anticipation. Thank you!

Finish this story! It\\\'s honestly one of the best I\\\'ve read on here. I found it yesterday and read the whole thing in one go!