All Comments on 'Conquered: Spoils of War Ch. 05'

This is the second time I read this story and I absolutely love it. But I really really need to know the end. Please will you finish it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

We are all in need of a befitting end to this story . You have a gift. So PLEASE, PLEASE, continue sharing with us.

I love the stories. I just would like to see Jolie and Arik both come to see that they love each other.

are you ever going to finish this story or going to do as countless others have and leave it hanging without an ending..??? please do add more, finish it. it would be truly a great story if only it had an ending...

What have you been doing with your life? Finish it or take it down. You're giving ppl hope by keeping it up! Argh!

What happened? Why aren't you finishing this???

This story significantly improved with each chapter! It would be so great to see you finish it! :-)

im joining all the others comments of PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this. It isnt finished and i would love to see it done

plz i enjoyed thde story soooooooo much plz hurry with the next chapters PLZ!!!!

when FANTASTIC stories aren't finished!

Arik bow down to Jolie. He's such an ignorant arse. I wish you would continue this story, so if you can-if you are there-continue!

Please please please finish this. A truly wonderful tale that deserves a conclusion... LOVED IT!!!!

love this story so passionate please finish this story, I can't get enough.

First The Novice, then Vampire Seduction, and now Conquered!! Why have you left so many stories unfinished, all at pivotal moments in the story? UGH...you make me so angry and anxious at the same time. I think you've written the best stories on this site, so please please please finish this story.

This is by far the best story I have read on this site. Yet, I don't quite understand the timeline. Was Jolie captured for 3 or ~several~ months? It was probably just a typo, but I wondered just the same. I'm just being picky, so I'll try to wait patiently for the continuation of this story.

p.s. Maybe Liana can threaten Jolie's life, which finally opens Arik's eyes to how much he respects and loves Jolie. I'll settle for anything at this point, but I wanted to write out my appreciation for this story. Bye.

This is by far the best story I have read on this site. Yet, I don't quite understand the timeline. Was Jolie captured for 3 or ~several~ months? It was probably just a typo, but I wondered just the same. I'm just being picky, so I'll try to wait patiently for the continuation of this story.

p.s. Maybe Liana can threaten Jolie's life, which finally opens Arik's eyes to how much he respects and loves Jolie. I'll settle for anything at this point, but I wanted to write out my appreciation for this story. Bye.

I am absolutely a fan of this story and every once in a while i check to see for new additions...sadly..there is none...oh jolie what a confusing torture...arik is just a well defined character, great job!! Like the rest...I wait for the continuation.

this story, it is great to have you back but we have to know what happens with jolie and arik!

hey ur stories r good but wotz the use when u don ever finish them, itz not fair 2 the readers to get them hooked on them & leave us hanging with no updates 4 years, either post stories u think u'll finish writing or don bother posting at all,sorry 'bout the harsh comments, no offense meant, jus frustrated as i've been waiting 4 updates 4 more than a year....

We have to have more. C'mon. Please?

loved the story but when will we hear the rest of the story? you should really continue because it's really great!

Please you have to go on that is pure cruelty leaving us hanging like that.Have to know what happens but anyway beautiful story thanks a bunch

This is a very well-written story. Good plot line, grabs ahold of the reader's attention and wraps you up in it. However, it is not fair to leave it up here when it's been up unfinished for 2 years. Please finish it or take it down until you can! (I'd rather you finish it! :-D)

I am also waiting on the rest of the story. I love to write stories too. If you don't mind some input. I think you should start the next chapter out with a cause and effect. Cause he took her back from her home world. Her sister and his brother reaction was. Because we all would like to know if the sister ever found out about her being the breeding love slave. Will she try to save her sister by putting brother against brother to get her back or still her again. When will he find out his true feeling for her are love. When will she know he want to marry her because he loves her. If you would answer all these question in your next chapter. I will dance at your wedding. lol. Once again wonderful story

All begging you to update this story! Please! We love the story, please continue! It is the best fantasy story on this site! Can you give us a time limit or something?

This story is amazaing. You just have to finish it. I can't wait to hear the end. It's so good. I hope you complete it one day. :)

I love this story. Please finish it!!!

received, I wonder if this'll make any difference. I found this story today and read it all in one go. It's a beautiful story and I thank you for writing it.

I'm waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter, just like the rest of these people. I know I won't be disappointed!

I love this genre, and am trying my hand at writing in it as well, but I must say, I'll never be able to beat yours! An offical fan, Lillian. ~KR.

I loved your story very much. I enjoyed the characters that you developed very much. I felt Jolie's emotions so well after she was captured due to the amazing characterization and writing. The plot line is amazing. Yet, I agree with the other people, who posted comments. I wish that you update this story. You have many comments and fans, who are eager for an update. If you do not believe you will finish a story, then perhaps no post it.

PLESE Please PRETTY PLEASE finish this story! I love all of your stories, but this one is the best and not knowing how it ends is way too disturbing!

I loved your story and hope one day it gets finished, It's one of the best I have read. ever.

dont leave us hanging!

on your bio page you said a new chapter would be up within the month so hopefully soon?

Keep up the great work! xx

Pleeeaaasssseeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Finish the story. Perhaps you have written it in novel form??? I will look for it and buy them all, if you will just tell us the title.

As all the others have written Please let there be an end to this wonderful story

So i saw that you said you would update the last chapter within the month so i keep reading and rereading this hoping that i'll look at that lovely yellow icon will be there telling me that it's up!

So please...pretty pretty pretty please...I'm dying to know...please update soon!

I too come and reread hoping that there will soon be an update!

Wow! My My My! You know how to write a story girlfriend! Dominant males are my favorite! I just want to respond to the other readers complaining about Arik. Arik is a KING! No one has or ever will deny him, not in any manner. He has total control over his people and full respect from his warriors solidifying his power. Yes, Arik is a total frickin arrogant bastard, And he dosen't even know it! Jolie is an anomoly. She resists him(in her way) Arik has Never encountered this before. He knows he will never tire of her, hence the Slave neckless... which tells everyone who protects her. It is obvious he loves her... and he will love her in His Own Way... the way a KING who has Never been in Love before. I think when Jolie's baby is born she could again challenge Arik over the slave system/ marriage issue and ask him "what will happen to me if you die?"

This is a really great story, it puts me in mind of Johanna Lindsey's 'Warrior Woman' stories. It is well written and makes you want to continue reading, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Aren't you working on one?? Please, please, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The crowd has spoken. "WE WANT MORE"

Surely there is at least 5 more chapters that are going to be written. I don't want to be saying "did Jolie admit she loved Arik and not just lust" Did Arik finally realize that he's in love with Jolie"

please keep writing i cant wait to finish this story and find out the fate of princess jolie, king arik, and their child! please please please finish the story. i will keep checking back for updates!

In twenty days, it will be three years since this story has been last updated...

and today it has been 5 years, 3 months and 13 days since this storyline began...

and you know what else?

I still wait with delirious anticipation! hahaha

On a more serious note, wishfulthinking i thought that you were going to post ch. 06 in february? Please put your fans out of their misery!!!

I hope that the next post comes soon!

Waiting ever so faithfully,

Cinta xxO

i know that you said you would update, but pleeeease put up another chapter soon!

She keeps going on about her pride but everytime he touches her, she melts in arms.

i hope you continue the story soon. I would like to know what happens next...will she finally give in? will he admit that he loves her? you have officially become my favorite writer on here.

Hot and awesome and well told.

now, this is just pissing me off.

you write really well, but I cant read this story anymore, because that girl just has no dignity left.

i like the fact she has no dignity left

Obviously you've never experienced passion. It's pretty impossible to deny someone who evokes passion in you. She can't help her reaction to him, and even then she holds onto her dignity. Idiot.

I found Wishfulthinking in the non consent section... This story is AMAZING

It's not that she has no dignity left. It's that she can't resist the feelings that he gives her. And why should she?

I think I'd quite like it, however non-incharacter it is, for her to give him a dry slap. Having said that - this story is great!

might like to have his massive length driven up her noble and unopened ass. maybe if he's nice, he lets her lube him up by taking him in her mouth-or her pussy, then he opens her anally. she might like to really be fucked well in her little tight tush.

Cute! And don't disdain "cute," you femme Neanderthals.

Some sex toys from say--Japan--are as cute to play with as Totoro. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0096283/

Found at "Lit.:" "Iroha"

Pastel toys as cute as some girly anime.

No, these pretty things don't appear to be very aggressively dominant, but are no less desirable for this. Put one next to your computer. Fondle it to relax.

It's a pet.

and open their hearts."

to Totoro

whatever.

I am not one to mince words.

as "woman" is a mystery, a symbol in a lot of literature by males--

(ok--i'm being romantic)

being made a symbol of sorts is an honor

this thing, creature is THAT important

girls love mysteries

especially sexual mysteries

(we're VERY smart)

that males as evil as they inherently are

...

i won't do them the honor of saying

(you know--that thing about sacre words)

girl-rabbit

it may seem like a dream--

things are not what they seem--

it's magic for you--

rain tumbles down, the bus is late

suddenly--he--is by your side--

just open wide

now begins a new adventure for you--

and you'll be with Totoro--"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OpMVGgwfMcA

just open wide--

watch him play in the rain--

a magical adventure for you

for such a very, very long time--

it's magic for you--

Totoro--"

"... might like to have his massive length driven up her noble and unopened ass. maybe if he's nice, he lets her lube him up by taking him in her mouth-or her pussy, then he opens her anally. she might like to really be fucked well in her little tight tush.more... "

There's no reason to believe she thinks her--SUPPOSEDLY--unopened ass is "noble."

So just shut the fuck up.

Before she sticks something you don't (?) want up yours.

"In a modern world where ... women say, 'I don't need you,' I say, "I desperately need men' ... It takes a man in me to tell you that I'm on my knees for men."

postfemi--

gorg us!

rabbitgirl

where girls/women can say

WE LOVE MEN

"The memory will shine." Belle & Sebastian"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mwxjJ4xBsnY

I love the voices of women writers, poets. How I've looked for them. To hear women--other than Sharon Olds--speak our desire and love for men. That sounds formal. Sorry. And to be honest. And not afraid of political crit.

That we are past having to do this knee-jerk hate males things--

we can just enjoy them, like eating oysters, or chocolate (sp?), or whatever ...

like eating raw oysters and drinking Dixie beer early in the morning after getting off a Greyhound bus to New Orleans from Tucson where we were grad students in poetry and phil.

This really happened. In my real life. I can die happy.

(But not if I hadn't had my ...)

"THE MEMORY WILL SHINE." B&S

Because "He" was Faulkner, and she was His daughter.

(Just joking.)

And after Faulkner, she gave up on their ilk (sp?) forever.

when there is absolutely no reason to.

That's just how they are.

Of course, they might write a sestina.

They might--

or they might kneel in the street and pray like Christopher Smart.

But the good people, and there were quite a few (look it up), forgave him. Christopher Smart.

His pomes are even part of the Episcopal Church's song and prayer book.

Sorta like Blake--adoration of animals, songs of innocence and further innocence

terrible symbol. (Anne Sexton and all that.)

This just bores me.

I've lived in the south most of my early life, including Mobile, AL.

Of course seafood was a big deal.

And it just was "exotic."

And if anyone wants to act like it's "natural" to eat raw oysters, I just don't think so.

Any more than it's "natural" to eat chitlins.

"I think I'd quite like it, however non-incharacter it is, for her to give him a dry slap."

In fact, I think I'd quite like slapping a number of people were it not illegal. One might be put in jail, etc.

I've slapped some people--my da for one. And he deserved it. Or did I just imagine this? See "The Playboy Of The Western World" and his "I killed my da."

He--the playboy--is a hero. Until his undead Da shows up.

F. Prose and "s&m"--I meant--only--her intro to "Nine & A Half Weeks." I read this--her intro--because I admire her so much. But what the hell--D. Merkin and etc., were all off on (mild?) versions of this stuff, so--

I think this has been a major--lately--fad in women's lit.

I'll say I'm a lesbian (no--won't git out that way) or a castrate (sp?)--whatever--to git out of this. And still be chic.