All Comments on 'Colonization Ch. 01'

This looks like an excellent start to what could become a fantastic series. Your writing is free of the usual spelling and grammar mistakes and is sensual in its description of the takeover of both victims. Its pace is slow and highly descriptive. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Good luck!!

Great start, waiting for more Chapters to this one!! Great story line!!!!!

Excellent! It's been a long while since I've read stories of this theme and writing style. Hope you would continue with the potentially fantastic series!

WTF is with your obsession with anal penetration? This could have been a very interesting story if you could get butts out of your brain for ten minutes.

Not usually into this kind of story but since it seems I am aroused I will read on !!