All Comments on 'Cliffhanger'

by sirhugs

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sooooo?

That's it? He died?

oldtwitoldtwitover 12 years ago
Fantastic

Fantastic read, what a super plot what a great ending and so well paced throughout the whole thing, brilliant.

BedtimeStories77BedtimeStories77about 18 years ago
Wonderful!

I loved what you did with this tale, Sirhugs! "Cliffhanger" is a wonderfully clever title for it. The backpacking flashback was a fun little twist in the beginning to get a feel for the kind of guy Barry was.

:)

And, of course, your description of sex is delicious!

Another review is on its way! ;)

MunachiMunachiabout 18 years ago
nice story

fun to read...

neonlyteneonlyteabout 18 years ago
Slip Sliding Away

Interesting, convoluted tale, possibly too many characters, but an enjoyable read none the less.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 18 years ago
What a way to go. . .

A nice read there sirhugs. I loved the beginning. . .Ahhh the memories of being a farmer's daughter, well... mine weren't that good. lol. . .I liked the end too. I wasn't expecting it. Great twists. ~ Red.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 18 years ago
I can relate to old Barry

Very imaginative. Maybe a tad slow in the beginning but the ending was original and well-done. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

hyulhyulhyulhyulhyulhyulabout 18 years ago
Loved It

Very good story. I enjoy your writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very nicely done.

good luck in the contest.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 18 years ago
Fun!

That's the best last line ever! LOL Loved this, Sirhugs. Especially the farmer's daughters and the swarthy friend at the beginning. *chuckle* Poor Barry. :)

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