by Aliyahlovinsex
I just loved the story and the way it all worked out in the end. Keep writing. please?
Okay, that's just adorable. For a shameless plug on adoption, it was very well done, and I was interested in the characters and found myself caring about what happened in their relationship, and the sex scene was nice, too. Well done. ^_^
Rather than a "shameless plug", I prefer to view this as someone sharing a cause which is near and dear to them. Good luck!
What a beautiful story! I think this is your best yet.
Very touching.
I had tears running down my face reading this. Thank you for writing something so wonderful for the holidays.
Always, E
This site has many erotuc stories, BUT this one was a wonderful story to read I STAND IN A LOUD OVATION FOR THIS AUTHOR. The REAL joy of the Christmas season is truely to stand back and watch the joy of others as they truely recieve a gift that they have truely dreamed of!!!!!
story for the season. It's filled with love and I liked it a lot.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
Emotionally moving story that pulls hard on the heart strings. A wonderful capture of the Christmas Spirit. Well Done. Thank You
Coming from someone who just found her adopted sister, I agree with your passion for the topic... This was a beautifully told tale, I really felt the humanity. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for the touching read, and good luck in the contest.
Rumple
and so well told. A definite winner. Good luck in the contest.
A perfect way to set up my day. I felt all warm and happy after this read. Good luck!
Cookie :)
sweet story but with some quirks which I will email you about. The sex part was well done too, and fit in perfectly, rather than seeming to be tacked on.
I enjoyed the story. I cannot give criticism, because I am not a writer.
I wish you the best