All Comments on 'Chicago-Style Valentine's Day'

You should have, (for those who did not pay attention on the day it was on the history channel) that the brothers G were actually the Gusenberg brothers and the Thompson machine gun was actually a thompson sub-machine gun sometimes affectionately known as a chopper or tommy gun in WW2.

Would have been neat as hell at the end if Aggie laughed and told Willy in gun moll style that " It looks like you get the first piece of my ass tonight after all. Jimmy's cock is probably not in any shape to get hard now."

Period pieces are always fun, I also saw the story on the massacre the other poster was talking about. Being a crime buff I enjoyed this immensely. You had a lot of detail, along with great dialogue. Good luck!

Loved the period piece... I thought that she would save them both by getting them occupied and missing the appointment by a few minutes.... a great story.

Great threesome action. I'm all flustered now thank you!

Love the threesome, well done!!!

A very enjoyable read. Happy Valentine's Day! ~Imp

Good writing. Good action.

You did an awesome job.... I know you will probably get some bad reviews but dont let them beat you down. Keep writing.

To each his own, ya know? What one finds hot, another finds warm. It's just different tastes.

However, except for those who feel the entire genre has no merit (such as the putz who refuses to turn its caps lock off), you would be hard pressed to dismiss this as the same old, same old.

I was hoping Robert Stack would get involved in some way, but it was a good time nonetheless. Liked the uncertainty in the way the guys dealt with each other's presence, which is the way it happens (or so I've heard).

Eric ...I'm dumbfounded but should have seen it coming... Great story woven here...sizzling HOT and tender. A Valentine's story that has broken my heart. (don't worry...I'll recover). LOVED IT!

Wimpy husband giving his slut wife away was so pitifully sweet, but stopped reading when the respectful loving wife induced braindead husbands gay cock sucking action began under threat of butt fucking his best friend - gee, author why further ruin a wussie male dominated story with gay sex???

Judging by comments, maybe I read a different version than the excited ones!!

Well written tale. I thought the ending could have been stronger, but I'm probably the only one. Tremendous job of scene setting.

Rumple

Ending left me looking for one more paragraph to close with a slam. But I really liked the sex and the opening. I read the whole thing in about 3 minutes, so it had some energy! Good Job

Well paced read, pulled me all the way through - to the end.

Concur with last two posters, ending needed more.

Great style and a very original piece well written and incorporating great dialogue. Hot, hot sex too! Thanks for the read.

An original idea, very nicely written. However, I agree with dreampilot that it would have been better if the threesome had been so busy fucking that they missed the massacre.

Wonderfully well written. You captured one of my fantasies in the first twist and nearly broke my heart in the second. I agree that the ending needs just a little bit more, it seemed a litte rushed. I loved this story hon. Looking forward to reading the rest of your work. ~Minx

Great story- one of my favorite fantasies, and you did a fantastic job writing it!

Cucks and whores Chicago style. Even your pizza is better than this.