All Comments on 'Champagne and Strawberries.'

This was a well drawn tale with a nice surprise at the end. Very well done.

Not hard to do, but still...

You really should write more. Loved that twist at the end, dearie. Let me know when you get more posted.

ending blew me away. I had to read the name twice before my mind actually caught on. Fantastic story all in all.

naughty naughty throwing that wicked curve ball at the end like that. Very good.... I liked it.

Always, Lizzy

If I'd thought of it before you, that is...

Your writing skills are quite nice and that's an awesome plot. I shake warmly by the hand, dude!

If I'd thought of it before you, that is...

Your writing skills are quite nice and that's an awesome plot. I shake warmly by the hand, dude!

to agree with your other fans...very well done...bravo*smile* keep up the great work. i found you thru the other story just released this evening and glad i did, hope to hear more from you soon and often. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Excellent first story, Chris. Kudos. ~Imp

saw it coming a mile away, but you did a good job. Very sweet

Wow! What a story! Loved the twist too, I didn't see it coming. The whole thing though had me wet right from the beginning!

I read this story because a female friend of mine has masturbated over it. I can understand why. Good writing, excellent plot with a clever twist that isn't outrageous.

Enjoyed the twist! Reminds me of the quote..."Foreplay -or, SEX, as we lesbians call it." :)