All Comments on 'CarousHell'

Thanks for sharing your talent!

JR Parz

What can I say? What a hauntingly scary story with an erotic twist. Well done Daddio!

Fantastic story,gripping to the conclusion. Hope you writ and submit many more

Very haunting story, beautifully written. An excellent read, Ex Bo!

now thats the way to do horor

This story is excellent. The idea is brilliant and like great horror writers such as Lovecraft it works on the futality and seeming banality of the situation. All she wanted to do was tease a circus hand and now she's an unwilling but responsive sex slave forever.

Really! I let the pot boil dry while I read this story- burned the handle right off it...

This is true erotic horror, scary and compelling.

of the most inventive imaginations I've ever seen. That story was hot and scary, creepy. I'll never look at another carousel the same way again...

Not even I can find fault here. Technically adequate, but in terms of content...breathtaking.

I relished it and appreciate it.

Make it so it hurts your face,

-D-

I can only echo the comments before mine - excellent job, and my favourite element (even more than the obvious) is the creepiness :) Kudos.

I must say, that is one of the best erotic horror stories I have read for quite some time. The way the tale drew me in, taking me deeper into its nuances was thrilling in itself. I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.

an erotic horror story that is actually worthy of the genre, thank you so much. Way hot!

From a fellow-bohunk.....Most excellent - I thoroughly enjoyed your work. Look forward to more

Your story has been mentioned in the Author's Hangout SPOOKY BLAST FROM THE PAST Review Thread!

That is such a wonderful, yummy tale of entrapment, torture, and helpnessness. The details were equisite, the sensations and even the movements. This story is, without a doubt, one of the ones destined to be near the top of my favorites list. t'Sade.

thank you so much, i thougrally njoyed it... with my hand rubbing against my clit, i came like never before, thanks.

Absolutely LOVED this story. It was very sexual and oh so arrousing.. But beyond that, it was amazing. Such a creative story line, very unique in so many ways. ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL. KUDOS.

This is the best story I've read on this site

I adored this story. Congratulations to the author for making this the most exiting peice of writing I have seen in a very long time. I was rivetted. I have two fears now: that of being a prick tease, of which I know I rank highly; and secondly I will not ever go near a Carousel! Second thoughts, I may just walk by on a moonlit night!! Again, well done to the author. I will be reading this over and over again!

this story was so good. made me cum twice! good job.

Wow, this is so different from the usual norm you get on here. Bizarre, sexy and scary and spookily enough i was listening to a song called carousel whilst reading this. Five stars!

~Miss Deviant~ x

fabulous imagination shown here, and oh, so fucking sexy. Been a favourite of mine for some time x

pretty new to this fantasy horror stuff, but wow this is GREAT. i'm revving like a mofo ;)

This was a really great story. I truly enjoyed it.

That was, as titled in this comment, surreal and beautiful. I'm going to get shivers the next time I go to a carnival, methinks...

Impressive... just the right amount of scary and hot, mixed up into one. Fantastic! Thank you :)

This may be the best erotic story I have ever read! (and I read a LOT!)

This would be a great submission for Year's Best Fantasy and Horror. Very well written, I was thoroughly drawn in and had goosebumps throughout. I don't think they take stories with this much sex but it is a thought and definitely meant as a compliment to your writing and the story.

The worst. "1" !

Very well written, builds up to a great climax!

This along with 'hunted' are the two best stories on this site.

I loved it, very different and reminiscent of a twilight zone story.

Is that even a word. I know for really good music, you say it has infinite replay value. What about a story that you can go back to year after year after year and still get a huge charge from it? Re-readability? I don't know what you call it, but this story has it. Great. I've been dumpster diving for great erotic horror stories, but time and time again I have to go back to the great ones because they are so few and far in between.

wowi what a terrific story love it

I came twice... what better compliment could there be to a piece of erotica delectably written xD

I don't think Jolene deserved anything she got, but there is something about this story that keeps me coming back, again and again. My favorite literotica story. Thank you.

You used excellent imagery in describing the carousel--I could visualize it as I read.

The images of Jolene's physical and emotional collapse seemed realistic.

BelleJ2009

Wow!! Amazingly hot story. I could only make it as far as the point Jolene finally reached her first, cataclysmic orgasm. I was edging along with her as she was being edged and when she exploded, I exploded. My body let go so intensely that I came more convulsively than I have ever have in my life. I was asleep almost before my climax finished and slept for several hours afterward. The visual that your wonderful story painted was the most erotic image my mind's eye has ever seen. No question, this story will join my must-reads for those times when I'm desiring to self-pleasure. Thanks so much for the wonderful tale!

Undeniably superb story. Hellish nature is intoxicatingly horrific.