All Comments on 'Butterfly's Sacrifice'

Good story.

Thank for an entertaining story in a familiar setting!

Great story! I especially loved the suprise in the beginning, when the vampires first showed up!

Nice. My comments in your discussion thread.

What a wonderful tale you weave. My favourite line in the story is: "but one fingertip to the suture on my tongue convinced me otherwise." But then, I am partial to filmic terms like suture. :D Again, great read, Penny!

Now THIS is a fantastic vampire story--original and hot!

Your characters came to life on the page and the story was riveting, but I've come to expect nothing less. Good luck in the contest. ~Minx

Penelope Street and Scintillate are synonimus.......

to amaze and entertain me...

Very well done!

Girl, you did a wonderful job.

Scary, hot and interesting all in one package.

Good luck in the contest.

Black Tulip

Incredible! Anything I say would be damning you with faint praise! Not only were the erotic parts spot on, everything flowed...the internal logic, the character's interactions, everything!