by cahab
I normally like to see more sex but as this is a chain story I realize there is a tease factor, and can't wait to see what comes up next.
i like this story v much .i find it vv exciting and leave a chance for each one to have his own imagination on it but i think the auther have to reconsider the way of writing(i mean some more obvious and clear vocabularies and phrases)
This story sounds kinda like British Chick-Lit (which happens to be my FAV). It had a great start and even turned me on, can't wait to see whats next!