All Comments on 'Blood for the Vampiress Ch. 01'

by 100 Angry Bananas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow X2

I will be going on to the next chapter! I hope they keep coming!

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Dramatic!

You have a flair for the dramatic! :) It's quite the horror scenario setup though, very fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Interesting setup

but a bit sketchy. Hopefully, the details will fill in as the series progresses.

kaantikaantiover 17 years ago
Great

I really like this, especially the blood. I am looking forward to reading more. More description would make something that already good even better.

sacksackover 17 years ago
You style is tough and very gritty....

and not all readers will respond. However, I did like this story despite the blood and guts details. Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
So far

The description is a little purple, but the plot is good. I really like the description of the firey-eyed woman as he first meets her.

BakedbeankidBakedbeankidover 17 years ago
Great Start

Wow

What an opening chapter. Cant wait for the next instalment

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