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Nothing left to say that the others have not. Way to go!
Just simply wow.
So well written and the story never lost its pace. Can't wait to read more of your work :)
Beautifully written, erotic. Well-fleshed-out characters. I liked the parallel between the sexuality of the plant and the hitherto-unexpressed sexuality of the woman. It could have done well as a first time story, too. BTW, I hope the rest of the people of Nottinghamshire are better judges of a good story than the one who commented. Good luck with the contest.
The story was good enough to keep my interest. What I really enjoyed was your richly woven tapestry of words. Great writing style.
Give yourself a pat on the back for a first-rate job of presenting two well-rounded, interesting characters at the beginning of their relationship.
Rumple
was enjoyable to read as well as being very perceptive. Great job and good luck in the contest
You should be extremely proud of this story.
If left up to me, I'd end the contest now and
name you the winner.
More importantly, work like this raises the bar.
Thank you!
this is a wonderful story... i love the way it was told, with her voice...