- Romance
- Bird of Paradise
- Page 3
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- COMMENTS
herkeyfanalmost 18 years agoNothing left to say that the others have not. Way to go!
Just simply wow.
RebeccaMortonabout 18 years agoSo well written and the story never lost its pace. Can't wait to read more of your work :)
SlickTonyabout 18 years agoBeautifully written, erotic. Well-fleshed-out characters. I liked the parallel between the sexuality of the plant and the hitherto-unexpressed sexuality of the woman. It could have done well as a first time story, too. BTW, I hope the rest of the people of Nottinghamshire are better judges of a good story than the one who commented. Good luck with the contest.
hyulhyulhyulabout 18 years agoThe story was good enough to keep my interest. What I really enjoyed was your richly woven tapestry of words. Great writing style.
Rumple Foreskinabout 18 years agoGive yourself a pat on the back for a first-rate job of presenting two well-rounded, interesting characters at the beginning of their relationship.
Rumple
