All Comments on 'Betrayed Ch. 01'

Very erotic and well written. I can understand the temptation and confusion of the man. This (scenario)is out of my experience, and I consider myself 100% straight, yet am captivated by feminine glamour and am well aware that elegance and glamour are not the preserve of women. Indeed I would argue that many have 'lost' that art and that the mantle has been picked up by those who impersonate (I use the word out of simplicity and imply no criticism). This story is very teasing, but equally thought provoking. Well done

Your story was a fun read with lots of sex. Don't worry about that troll, to each their own. Keep writing.

I loved the story and hope there is a realationship possible int he folds with the new friends dont change a thing keep writing more let me know when a new one is ready

Very nice start of what I assume to be a longer story guessing from it labeled chapter 1 (hope so). Just a word to the "person" insulting you: If you would have read the story well, you´d have seen how gentle Dianna was. She neither forced him to suck her nor to be fucked by her. Probably you missed that while jacking off on the hot scenario, wishing you´d have been the center of attention. I am sorry for you. Lol, maybe next time when you have the courage to visit one of those girls with a little extra to fullfill your dreams.

hugs and kisses to you Angel,

Greta

A great read and well written too. Very erotic.

HEART, you have it. You write IT!!!

Very very arousing and unusual to have the man be dominated. His lack of strength or will power is kind of hard to believe though.

What confused me was the bit in part 1 where she is riding him. It is seems unclear if his organ is between her thighs or up her rear.

why do you have to make him as freaky as her. to me it's a turn off.

whatever happened to NO means NO?

a possibly decent story becomes trash so easily... this one has succeeded (in hitting the heap)

Really enjoying read. Well written, extremely hot with some thought provoking moments. Thanks for a written treasure; )

I am so sorry I read most of it. Yuck! Get this out from LW and place it in Fetish or Gay for crying out loud. -100 star.

that's what happens when you are too passive for your own good, you stop happening to life, and life starts happening to you. regardless of what you want or think you deserve.