All Comments on 'Be Mine'

There definetely needs to be a sequel to this story, I need to know what happens next. Great job!

PLEASE continue. I can only hope the boyfriend gets involved. Or fuck him, but we need more. I am so bookmarking you.

your the best..i had like a boner the whole time....

siberianbullet

Stellar writing...very hot!

wow this was a great story for me becuz i am a lesbian and i kno wat its like to want someone u cant have but end up having in the end..i wish there was more, i want more lol...i want these 2 girls to fall in love with each other, the one dumpin her boyfriend so the two woman can be together..this was great!!!

Very nice. Really enjoyed this x

Hot story but I wish there was more buildup. The storyline seemed too simple to be believable :).