by Miss Jane
This story has great potential, but it disappoints with its brevity in all aspects. The very fine writer Miss Jane should revise, expand, and embellish this story.
I would much rather you not use the relogious worg(s), it only chepens the otherwise wonderful story.
you darling.....have a tremendously sensual and seductive imagination. One to be treasured and adored! sexual abandon at its best....my cock is still throbbing.....psssst "I want you"
XXX Rob
This is the first that I've read of you Miss Jane, and it certainly won't be the last. Very impressed, cause it was very hot!
this one. It was the second one I read tonight and it was much better than the first.
I have read a lot of stories at Literotica knowing there has to be something good out there to read. Well I have found you Miss Jane. Keep them coming.
Annicea
I usually don't go for the exhibitionist/voyeur stories, but this one was incredibly hot! Very well written, great description of visuals, thoughts and emotions. Got me going! Great job Miss Jane!
very well written. The first submission I have read by Miss Jane, but certainly not the last. And she's a biker too boot! could she get any better??
loved this story and welcome you back with open arms and an open heart. This story like all of yours is very well written and you expressed yourself very well. Thank you for your story and sharing it with us.
As always, your stories tantalize and excite and illicit a "looking in from the closet" or, in this case, from the other side of a window into your secret world. Thanks for allowing us a short entry in...
Jane, OMFG, that soooo hot.. damn.. you delight me so! MMMM.. Paul
I loved all the story.It kept me excited and hard the whole time.I just had to jackoff to it.I shot a big load because of the story.