All Comments on 'Apology'

I had to read to the end, this one wasn't predictable at all. Great revenge tale....good luck!

Cecelia's perdictament goes from bad to worse and finally sinks into a complete terrifying experience. Wonderfully scary!

Good Luck in the Contest!

creepy. :) Unexpected and well written.

and yet so far. I loved this story! Creepy as the dickens, and a dynamite ending. This is a winner. Good luck in the contest.

Some great twists and a rather gruesome premise. You kept me guessing all the way through. Great story

Really interesting premise! I think the writing could be tightened up a little to enhance the readability and heighten the tension, but in all a very good effort. 'Course... I wanna know where the stalker got a flesh-eating virus! hehe :)

very creepy!

Well-written and fun. Cecelia was just enough of a bitch to enjoy seeing her get her come-uppance. It reminded me a bit of "SAW" with the whole Q&A, make the right choice, and cautionary message. I totally dug it.

GREAT story Ungender, as good as I've come to hope and expect from you. Keep up the amazing work.

Got any more of this caliber?

Would anyone think less of me, if I mentioned how hot I found Cecelia? one sexy cruel bitch!

Wow, what a creepy story. O_o