All Comments on 'Anthony's 18th Birthday'

This has the makings of a serial

Solid premise, excellent character development. We should all have it so good. Some editing is indicating but nothing that seriously detracts from the flow or enjoyment of the story.

Ce Bene, paisan.

Solid premise, excellent character development. We should all have it so good. Some editing is indicating but nothing that seriously detracts from the flow or enjoyment of the story.

Ce Bene, paisan.

When I see your name, I know that an entertaining and credible read is in the offing.

Most respectable and believable as to life's possibilities.

You are apreciated - With High Regard

An excelent story, well developed and believable plot and equally well developed characters. Best of all you developed more than the main two characters in some depth making the entire story more enjoyable. The dialogue was nicely done, bringing out the essence of the conversation without being too wordy.

I hope you intend to write at least one more chapter.

That story was great on all fronts; flow, dialogue, narrative, and plot. Everything about it was spot on.

Would there be any chance of visiting Anthony's other quests and how they compare back to Ella?

I'd bet the founders of literotica hoped for high-class submissions like this, and will add my kudos to the other superlatives offered here.

This story offers pretty good sex, but I don't like the plotline at all. The psychology of the two young people is well expressed, provided you care about a prepaid prostitute and a thug. But for Pete's sake get editorial help! The writing style is ruined by a long list of dumb errors.

I wish I could give a higher score. This is the best story I've read on this site!!