All Comments on 'An Offering of the Flesh'

good relation of sex to non-erotic components, and the use of italics. Good luck in the contest!

what a great story, eerie and seductive! xxx

Very well done. Good use of italics as well as proper punctuation and grammar. The twist of the story made it very interesting. Continue writing! You are very good at it.

Quit your day job! Seriously, your stories are beautiful and well-written. Short but sweet. Thank you for writing and sharing them with us.

Drac, darling, you did it again. Your talents never cease to amaze me. Fluent, articulate, engrossing and beautifully composed, as always and the story was great too!

Great story. Excellent writing. Erotic! Just lovely!

I've been amazed several times at how much better the stories are on this site. Thanx for another great tale.

Very well written not too fast and not too slow moving.

This is a beautifully done erotic story. I hope there are more stories that we can expect from you. Thank you.

Well done, Dracona. A lovely, erotic tale of possession and desire. I enjoyed it very much :)

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A little mystery mixed with lust and self discovery. What could be better? I particularly liked the final plot twist with "Monique" at the end.

I absolutely loved it. Well-written, beautifully portrayed, magically enticing. Anything more I should say in this?

Any chance of more....?

Was that the demon in the mirror or the maid trapped forever in the mirror? If that was the demon, that was nicest demon I've read about. But anyways, very good story, it was wonderfully written and keep writing more for all of us to enjoy.

Creepy, weird, sexy. A very enjoyable supernatural tale with a twist. Keep writing them.

Great story.. Would love to read more such stories.. Lots of love...

Great story well written

Love the story, it was very funny, new and interesting to me. I liked how on one page the ghost was very secretive and anxious and then on the next she was confident and smug. I’m sure how whispered voices for someone alone in a strange house in normal situations would have played out very differently but for erotica it was brilliant. Two thumbs up, Thank you.

This is a story that is fulfilling upon the conclusion but is so good you want more.

Delicious.

How wonderful.