All Comments on 'Amore de los Muertos'

I thought the beginning was a little slow, and the crude sophomoric language turned me off. But the sex scene was hot, with good descriptive detail.

Well, the situation which inspired this was a bit sophmoric... you ever had your 35 year old mother be so drunk, she was flirtign with someone more than half her age? not thats retarded...but thanks for bein honest with your view babydoll

darklittlefetish

I found this story to be a little predictable - did anyone really doubt that the guys were dead? I didn't mind the language - it was consistently used, sophomoric or not. Many people prefer it to clinical terms. A decent effort.

Thankx for ya input... the girls figured that they were just hangin out in the cemetary like they were.. chillin and everything...

Don't listen to the naysayers! I thought this was a very good story with a lot of great hot description. Very realistic when talking about scraping themselves. Nice!

you're sweet.. thanks fir your comment dear

can't give it a 100 cuz i know you've got better work--you know the work of yours i'm talkin about... ^^ but yours is better than mine, of that i'm sure. so i'm happy to put in my vote for yours.

love ya lots sweetie!

Yeah for some odd reason, it turned me on...Enz? Hot name. Latino? Even better. I guess my only problem with it was that I didn't get why Leona was dead? I thought she had a mom and everything that invited them to a party? Oh well, good luck :)

enz was based off of a guy i know.. the whole thing was a dream... a drunken stupified dream as a result of over idulgence in alcohol.. turned ya on huh? well if you liked it.. you'd love my other series..