by Vincent E
Now THIS is how you build sexual tension! Wow. Great characterization, VERY real people, this was bright, witty, a brilliant piece of work. You, mister, are now on my favorites list. So there! :P
It sounds like a lot of high school encounters. Was delightfully real. Keep up the good work!
middle ground concept
and even more brilliant
way of illustrating it!
Enchanted by the touches of humor injected throughout the story.....
This story came to life the moment I started reading it, and was completely mesmerized as it unfolded. Please continue. Claire and Vincent are a match made in heaven and I would love to witness this relationship unfold. Delicously sexy. Fantastic dialog, very realistic. I wait with wild anticipation. Yes I do have a fetish for pretty female feet, especially when she understands the kind of power she can command when she uses it to enslave her man. Poor Vincent, he's got it bad. I envy him.
I came to read this because it was recommended by Selena Kitt. Right from the start, I wasn't even aware I was reading. I was fully immersed! Brilliant!