All Comments on 'A Very Estelle Christmas'

Entertaining and generally well written, though I have to confess I'm curious about how you got "crimson liquid" from a bottle of Chardonnay...

This is way good. I expect to see a lot more of your writing. Excellent imagery, story line and loved the characters.

I enjoyed the way you pesented the Christmas theme wrapped around the naughtiness. The play between the women was warm and inviting. I really didn't notice that you said 'crimson liguid.' Myself I was too into the fur cuffs, the blindfold, and where the tongues were to notice. I look forward to seeing more naughty play with these characters. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

and I loved it. Just the right blend of sensuality and submission. MMMM...threesomes. A great read. Good luck in the contest :).

I have to agree you have a perfect blend and wonderful imagery in this one. The characters all come across well, and it was certainly hot =) Well done, and good luck in the contest!

Cute story with lovely characters. If only my Christmas's were like this. *sigh* I'd love to see you get an editor for the next one, Ungie. There are some things you could hammer out that would make this even better. Still, nice read...Thanks.

....Des

The girls get in the Christmas spirit just in time for the holidays as they present each other with their unique 'naughty' presents. Hot and Sexy! Terrific Write!

The action picked up at the start and didn't let up till the end. Really good.

I loved these characters! This was so much fun! "Minty Amelia-Sophia goodness." *snort* Good one :)

lively, interesting characters and a good story line. Best of luck!

first off, it was an honor doing so, secondly I admit I'm not the greatest editor of all time and don't drink alcohol of any kind so didn't notice the folly of the crimson liquid. and finally, EXCELLENT STORY

the only reason I gave this 3 starts was because it was written good, other than that I did not mind the blindfold, but when you got the handcuffs out that is when I stopped reading it