All Comments on 'A Second Chance'

On of my Top-25 of all time!!! Fifty-plus Stars!!!

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And yes, I know three people who heard people talking to/about them while they were in a coma!

Simply a beautiful story. God really does love us. It is nice to read a story that gives us a warm feeling. I'd give this one 10 stars.

DG Hear; you are a darn good story teller, thank you.

What a great story. Beautifully written plus a bit of drama and excitement. Definitely a five star rating. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

YES! There is a GOD as this couple can testify as well as the hospital personnel.

A God gave you a special gift for story telling ... Thank God!

Very easily five shining stars +++ for this masterpiece.

BJ

I just read this story for the first time in many years. I have to admit it brought tears to my eyes. Yes there is a God.

DG Hear

solid five first time reding this story brought tears to my eyes yes I bekive there is a god I have had many terible deases stage 4 cancer 30 years ago and now I suffer from stage four copd wqas told I shoud not have lived so long bye doctors so yes there is a god in my life ! great story// have added it to my favorites

This is the most beautiful story I have read on this site.

There was really no sex in it but that didn't matt one little bit. this was the best Romance story I have read and now I am going to search through your other stories.

THIS JERRY WAS SUCH A FUCKNUT CHARACTER!! HE WANTS TO MARRY A SLUT WHOM HE HASNO MOUTH TO ASK ABOUT HER PAST!! DESPERATE STUPID CUNT

Fantastic! It makes you believe in Man upstairs and forgiveness!

trying to make it all cute and loving. NO way do I see a person like her not having any sex for so long. I can see her being more mature and selective and I agree she may not love the guys bit going all celibate? I don't buy that. I don't think that had to be written in to save the story.

Interesting that so many commenters don't know that people can change. I did. Great story. 5 stars!

Can't change. BULL. Every person has the ability to make an adjustment in life. Sally went to college and had a life changing event and followed through with a change in attitude. While it was extreme it happens. Great story because we all change.

DP

Whether or not you believe Sally's change was due to God's help or her own belief and determination to change, this is a good story and is well written. I personally believe all change is possible, but if you do not take the first step and make a determined effort, it aint gonna happen.

Please continue writing.

I loved the stories. And yes their is a GOD!!

A very good story.

Once again, a very nice 5 star story

It seems a lot of the paragraphs were individual thoughts that didn’t tie in together well. It feels like the author was plugging in scenarios trying to keep the story exciting and/or intriguing which made it very choppy. Too bad.

I cried like a whooped baby. Love it

i have seen god work like this twice in my life i know hes real great story i cried

Always appreciate a ending where everything comes together for the good of the people involved. There seems to be some disbelief by commentators that people can change. I can't testify to divine intervention or to the truth of out of body experiences but I can testify to people being able to change. People who know me now could never imagine what an absolute MFer I was in my youth. Meeting my wife made me realize what an idiot I was and what I needed to do to change it. Without her I would have been dead and buried long ago. The love of a good woman is often bandied about in Literotica stories but sometimes the trope is true. I know. Thanks for the story!

cruel ending would have been if the babies were a different nationality. oops!

otherwise, enjoyable and sweet story that was probably a little too sweet for the jaded.

Good choice for baby names on Christmas. Five stars. Well told

JPB

I was so scared you were going to make her die in child birth. I really couldn't have taken that lmao

obvious 5 stars. great story, man

Sorry to burst the bubble of believers in the whole god thing but a quick Google search on the effectiveness of intercessory prayer will lead to a scientific study debunking the whole fantasy.

Being a christmas baby is bad enough, joint parties, friends can't make it because of family commitments, everything is xmas themed even though you just want to celebrate your birthday, but did Jerry and Sally have to make it worst by giving their twins Xmas themed names too? Talk about screwing up their future lives, they'll never be able to escape Xmas, say nothing of the teasing and bullying they'll get at school.

You just had to spoil it with all the god nonsense.

unexplained things happen all the time . whatever you believe is up to you . my youngest son is a christmas baby. my late daughter's daughter was born on the 23rd of dec. they both complain about getting shortchanged .

I hate how people are so insensitive today. As soon as God is mentioned the Christian haters come out with their tar and feathers. What happened to respecting people's beliefs? That only applies for everyone except for believers in Christ. That should tell you something. You are left in peace to believe in your preposterous life happened-by-chance fairy tale, so stop ridiculing the belief in God, that many have.

Excellent,, regardless of critics