by magicalmouse
This guy was just a little too sappy for me, but that is just the story. I was expecting a very different ending but overall I really liked this.
Gave you a 5!
His need to be seen as perfect showed that.This story was a lack luster tribute to erotica.
I've been reading Literotica on and off for more than a year. Now I know what I was looking for. Magical.
Is amazing! Hot sex, romance, it had it all! This is the only story so far I've given a 5 to :D
Defenitely hit home with one of the computer generation! A wonderful story!
Hit home for me. I can only say, that could have been me. Let's say, if only. Hot, hot sex; a great build up and wonderful descriptions. Good luck!
... the sappy, romantic ending because the sex was HOT! Happy Valentine's Day. ~Imp