All Comments on 'A Pact With Dawn'

Out of all the ordinary stories arises one that is well written, very stimulating and best of all, unique!

Great! Now, more please... I think we should follow Bear's life a bit longer...don't you agree?

Oh, one more thing.

You love animals, huh? An inspired, romantic werewolf story would be most welcomed from you fertile imagination!!

What is usually done on this site is very ordinary. There is a need for your talent.

Please, entertain us.

Hot writing -- I love it!

But please get an editor! Spell checking and proof-reading may not pick up the difference or usage errors in

'taught' vs. 'taut'

'lay down' vs. 'lie down'

'Your' vs. 'You're'

'thrusted' vs. 'thrust'

A new set of eyes in a fair editor can help greatly. Good luck!

This one screams for a continuation. The character of Dawn and the mystery of the demon child have me wondering which of a thousand ways running through my head this one could go.

( Not to mention the slow boil to searing heat of the sex ) Excellent!

A couple of little spelling/grammar issues, but quite easy to miss wrapped up in the tale. I only caught them on second review, testament to the power of the story.