All Comments on 'A Night Out With Friends Ch. 03'

I've never commented on a story before but I had to say how much I loved this one. It is well-written and has something for everyone. Just amazing!

Well, where is this party ?

I'm ready to join in.

Let's all get together and

have some fun !

Great job wyo_girl !

So this is the guessing game, right? Let me see...hot, structured (well-thought-out), long as shit...hmm...you writing the Swinger's Bible? I thought so. ;) Good start.

Great story it is one of the best I have read. Sex for every one. Desciption of scenes was very good. You have one great mind for sex. Is this from life or is it in your mind

Good story, well written, and better yet, it made my pussy wet.

your next lit. offering, "How to write a hot sex scene?" This certainly has something for everyone and was very sexy as well as a delight to read. Good luck!

You write a great story wyo_grl. You would make a great girl friend, sex partner, wife, or whatever. You had me hard from the strat to the finish. Loved it. Looking forward to reading more of you wirtings.

That was definitely the hottest group sex story I've read for ages. I was hard all the way thru'. You have a great imagination and i gave it 5....more please.

WOW!! Something for everyone in this well written, well thought out story! If anyone gets through this with dry pants, they need their pulse checked for signs of life!!

Signed: WYO BOY!!

Wonderfully crafted sex scenes. Fellini could have used this for a script. Great piece of writing (lol).

You definately have a way with words. I found myself imagining I was at the party watching all of these couples go at it. the vivid sex scenes left me wet and wanting more.

Your story gave me a little pre cum but no wood. Although I have to say I could easily see everything you wrote in my minds eye. It was long, but kept my short attention span busy! That's not easy to do. You are obviously a very good writer and have the ability to craft words into fantastic pictures. I look forward to your other holiday projects :) -MP

I would sooooo invite you to my next party.

A wonderful story,a bit of everything for all tastes, I wouldnt mind an invite to your next party,my pants are soaking wet just reading about it.Luv Jenny Cook

Wow, that was some story! Very well written and detailed with a little bit for everyone's taste. Excellent work wyo_girl!

An invite to one of your parties would be a life-changing event I believe. :-)

I'd like to see where this storyline goes from here it at all possible.

Hadn't discovered Literotica yet by Halloween of '06. Guess I'll have to look up the old contests, feel I really must read any story that beat this one in the contest.

great writing, thank you

a wonderful story.. so well told, with delicious descriptions, yet not too over the top. My eyes could not move quick enough..(tho my hand did..? *WEG*) to fill my head with the tale. Very well done..thank you..*S*

This story is amazing. The house must be a national landmark to hold that many couples are there. The sex was incredible.

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