All Comments on 'A Night Out'

Short and sweet; microcosmically horny. Would have been a 5 but for the shite English: where for were, your for you're. Get an editor, mate.

Chitty, Chatty story of a nights outing on the town. In spite of the problems with spelling, etc. I rather enjoyed the read.

Your description of the bar scene with the two girls, I thought was amusing and fun to read. Mate, don't be afraid to try again. We all get better, hopefully as we continue to write more.

Hot story dude, but for "crying out loud" can't you people describe the sex? How did it feel when he poked you, what did the other's ass feel like? was it like a pussy, or different?

Your use of grammer also needs work, but I did like the story line, just more description.

Rudy

I didn't find anything troublesome with your grammar; it was a stimulating read...and to answer Rudy's question, no screwing a guy isn't the same as screwing a chick, its a heck of a lot better, just like sucking cock is a lot sexier than eating pussy...

Although the grammar wasn't great, this was a hot story...short & sweet too.

I wish it had been me getting fuck in the ass.

Good job More Pease!!!!!!

i wanna read more

Hot story,thank you.

I'm relieved that the "he" in the story wasn't freaked out by being unexpectedly anal fucked, as in so many other trans first time stories. A few auto-correct typos, but decently written, otherwise.