All Comments on 'A Masquerade'

What a great story Tc..I loved the characters, their depth, thier humor..the humor added so much to the story, showed the complexity of the characters and how the dynamics between them transpired.

Wonderful and sexy work..loved it.

I loved this story ... Hot, romantic, humorous with a hint of mystery and more than a dash of heat. Well done .. a fantatic entry for the contest.

Great job, TC! Your characters are very likeable. Good luck in the contest.

but you write it well! Whew! Good luck :)

Happy Halloween & good luck in the contest!

That's all I can say...just "WOW!"

Great plot and character portrayal. Good luck in the contest.

Oh my Goodness I Loved it alot.

is what I always expect from you Tom and you always deliver. Good luck and happy halloween, hon!

Great characters, a heartfelt love and smoking hot sex--what more could a reader ask for?

What a terrific read TC, of course, coming from you I knew it would be. Super job with the characters, I felt like I knew each one.

This isn't usually a category I read but since it was you I did. I wasn't disaapointed, but then I rarely am with your characters and clever, well paced plotlines. Good luck TC

well yet again you have proved what a wonderful writer you are. Thankyou

Loved it all.

Really enjoyed this- the story was funny and smart; the sex was v. hot; and for once the portrayal of fems was not insultingly stereotypical.. Grand, Grand work.

I loved this story, very tasteful and engaging. Thank you for sharing.

I loved this story. I about died laughing for half the part and Em was super sweet. Keep up the great work.

Really enjoyed it.

A wonderful, very readable story. Like others, I found the character development superbly realistic. And could readily relate to Gideon's attraction to Em. One night while on temporary duty assignment to Thailand in 1965, I lustily chased after a beautiful but rather flat-chested female after having consumed more drinks that I can recall. When Thai bar girls called out to warn me in broken English that I was chasing a Katoey (transsexual), I pretended not to understand and renewed my efforts to catch up to her as she quickly exited the bar. I caught up to her after a brief chase, and we made love on a blanket under the stars with a full moon shinning brightly. It was like Gideon and Em. Only her saliva provided the lubricant and she climaxed without any contact with her small flaccid penis.

any story that references "Princess Bride" is going to be something worth reading... and so it was!