by E.P.M.
knew who it was about as soon as I read Mikey and Judith...seems you are as much of a connoisseur of super serial killers as I am. Great Job...you deserve a 10
I got a bit crossed-up on his time away from home. That quibble aside, The ending was great and, IMHO, you did a fine job of putting the reader into his head.
Rumple
morphed from replying "clown-clown" to the boyfriends' initial question to discussing whores and contemplating murder. Seems an extreme change, unless he suddenly got possessed by Damion! (who must be older than 6!!)
A brief glimpse into the mind of - and I loved this last phrase - "Little Michael Myers, weirdest fucking kid in Haddonfield, Illinois." Looks like Mikey has an illustrious career ahead of him! Thanks for sharing, E. P. M.
read, but fun :) I've only seen one of those Halloween movies. Maybe I'll have to watch more. Anyhow, thanks for the story, but I'm gonna have to say I preferred your other one.
While I found your other story far superior and much higher quality, I enjoyed this one too. It was a short cute little piece that might not be completely accurate to the Halloween movies, but was a fun light read nonetheless. If that's what you intended, you nailed it.
It was appropriate to read this as Halloween 5 played in the background. A great little story ... Good luck!
Cookie :)
as some others had said. To me it was disturbimg. Makes one wonder if indeeda psycho or sociopath begins their evilness in such a manner. My main emotion was being, well, creeped out. Cheryl