by Hulder
Loved the story, especially the setting, and the legend.
Great atmosphere, interesting characters, and highly enjoyable synchronized eroticism.
I could feel the cold air, smell the leaves and sex combined on the night air. Good imagery, please keep writing.
Beltain has always been a night of majick and the best night for dreams to become reality. I loved the mood and the great description of the legend. Good work and Blessed Be!