All Comments on 'A Great Gift'

by Rattlesnake1775

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sacksackover 18 years ago
the rough sex.....

seems a little out of place given the gentleness of the holiday season. Yet, your sex scenes are HOT HOT HOT, and your overall writing style is compelling!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
just another whore

excuse to be a whore that all this is about.you find them on all jobs, promote me and i'm yours.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Naughty & Nice

Other than the thought that Amanda's reaction to the Miami trip was a bit extreme (maybe I missed something), I enjoyed your story a lot. Hot & horny fun. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Why bring Darren into the story.

Darren was irrelevant to the story...

She reminds me of my assistant. LOL

NikiiBabieNikiiBabieover 18 years ago
Excellent!

Wish I could give it a '10'!!

NikiiBabieNikiiBabieover 18 years ago
Excellent!

Wish I could give it a '10'!!

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