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Marklynda2Marklynda2about 2 years ago

The joys of exhibitionism!

Never experienced dogging but am curious. Good introduction to the topic. Thanks for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ewwww

Neither comedic nor erotic. Whichever you were aiming for.

Perhaps this comes from trying to touch on too many fetishes at once?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Crap

You obviously know nothing of Scotland. This story was a whole heap of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
blah blah blah

it sucks!!!! ... I just wasted my time reading this shit!!! Ugh!!

jaqvertjaqvertalmost 13 years ago
hmmmm...

you did the other story almost word for word in some scenes, it takes the pleasure away unfortunately.

MysticbondsMysticbondsalmost 13 years ago
Twittered this fine story...

I know its been a while since you've posted a story, but I wanted to let you know that I think this is one fine story. I'll be posting a bit more about it on my blog (see post of 7/17/11) at www.mysticbonds.blogspot.com

hals99hals99about 14 years ago
Can I be in your family?

Sarah,

Another hot and sexy story. My favorite part is when you ask that slow guy with the big tongue to eat you. You wouldn’t have to explain it to me. I love red furred pussy. My second favorite part is when your cousin shot his load down your hungry throat. My cock was hard all the way as you described the horny details and I imagined I was in your family. Can’t wait to read more.

hals99

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
EXCELLENT!!

Absolutely wonderful Literotica, Thanks Sarahhh. Good to see the mention of NZ in there too (my home cu-cun-country)

Just one thing though - and not too many people are aware of this, Russell Crowe is Actually a New Zealander - Some Kiwi's would rather that didn't get out but it is 100% true. just thought you should know.

The two stories of yours that I have read so far are going to keep me coming(???) back for more!

gedwardgedwardalmost 16 years ago
loved it

Hi Sarah, great story, especially as it is set in the UK. Do you have dogging in America. Take care Ged

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hot stuff

this story was amazing it kept me going for hours and is the best story i have read so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
TOO HOT !!

Sarah,

I'm going to stop reading your stories, unless you go "Dogging With Me?"

Teach my Jeannie how to write like this. Then maybe I can get her to go "Dogging?" :)

Here's Cumin' @ Ya !

Thanks,

Jim

tipofyourtonguetipofyourtongueover 17 years ago
Thank you

Such a good story. I'm throbbing beautifully inside, a testament to how deeply I was .. touched. *lol* Thank you, mideario.

NookiehunterNookiehunterabout 18 years ago
Scottish Commando

It appears that our Sarah has turned into a Scottish commando, wearing as little as possible and nothing underneath that, and ready to be fucked at all times. Wonderful story!

Nookiehunter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
nice one

As I live 20 miles from Loch Lomond I shall keep an eye out for you.

Nice storys - they kept me hard

xxxx

fatsam4Ufatsam4Uover 18 years ago
Another Great One

Another great story as usual. I am a fan for life and ready to read all you have!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ready for Mickey D's

As soon as I get to visit Scotland, I'm going to find that Mickey D's to see if Morag and Hamish are still there. Cute story, Sarahhh! And timely, since this dogging thing is really the "in" thing in the U.K. I've seen movies...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Congratulations

Great story sexy, funny and hard on entertaining you did it again. I think you are the best writer in Literotica. Keep up the good work!

Good StudentGood Studentalmost 19 years ago
Great Story, Great Author

Another excellent story from one of the best writers on this site. Thanks, and looking forward to more!

MumrMumralmost 19 years ago
Yummy

I think my fav part was when she took him in the ass. That boy was wanting that for a LONG time. MMM. Glad we got to see his first shot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sarah Rocks!

Great story and quite the imagination. Do you dream in color? Looking forward to the breast milk. YUM!

DarkIrishDarkIrishalmost 19 years ago
Excellent

I loved it, hot, sexy and funny, just brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
being there

wish i was the guy . i haven't tried wearing womans wear yet,but will try anything once. it kept me hard all the time .wow!

lightly comical(nice) and stiring .would like mor sexual variety,but if i cum who cares. jack

RiokRiokalmost 19 years ago
What a great family-when's the next family reunion

Sarah, Sarah, Sarah...it was a long wait but well well worth it to read this story! You could get Richard Simmons and his tiny little pee pee hard enough to want you to suck him dry! Great vivid descriptions of every sexual act and response...how realistic and arousing! YOU'RE THE BESTEST!!

Glad you're back and am now waiting for your next submission-did I really say "submission", there I go again, getting hard all over again!!!

nickhayes78nickhayes78almost 19 years ago
Great Story

Very hot story. The exhibitionism(dogging) part is very very hot, especially with you getting gangbanged. Keep up the great writing Sarah and I'll be excited to read more in the future.

chowchowchowchowalmost 19 years ago
I loved it!

This story had me aroused right from the start. I loved the scottish accent too, and really got into the whole scene! For something I've never experienced it seemed amazingly realistic and this made me more aroused.

I hope you write more stories in the future - I'll be sure to read them!

All the best,

I.

pard75pard75almost 19 years ago
Sarahhh Keeps Getting Better

Since I am also of Scottish descent, this story had more than the usual effect (intense erection needing immediate attention). The Glasgow and Edinburgh details seemed all correct, and the dialect well done. But, readers, please note how much better a writer our Sarah has become. This was her best. Now excuse me while I attend to an urgent matter.....

purple eaglepurple eaglealmost 19 years ago
looking at licking lads and lassies

"Dogging", in my time on this earth I have not heard this term used until our dear Sarah enlightened us once again with her writing. I'd love to follow this young beauty on her worlwide adventures, but for now I must be satisfied with reading about her exploits, and satisfied I am. Thanks for broadening our horizons and temporarily lengthening our members.

summitxsummitxalmost 19 years ago
Eat a danish

Much better story girl, but I'm danish and we taste better LOL.

Just got back from a cruise to cozamel, lots of babes on board, would make alot good stories, PS did this girl in the porthole now that was fun

Don

Restless_Poet_22Restless_Poet_22almost 19 years ago
Beautiful.

You managed to string together a gang bang, incest, and assfucking and lesbian sex in a well written tale that had me smiling and hard the whole time I was reading, Good show!

shadow_92111shadow_92111almost 19 years ago
GGGGRRRRRREEEAAAATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!

Loved it, your writing is getting better and better. Now I will have to go and get some one to take care of this woody for me.

t_vanscoykt_vanscoykalmost 19 years ago
from a redhead who someone swears can be your twin

dogging is somethign I was already awear of... and I am more wanting in doing so here in the US...

Extreamly yummy story an after thoughts

Tams

t_vanscoykt_vanscoykalmost 19 years ago
from a redhead who someone swears can be your twin

dogging is somethign I was already awear of... and I am more wanting in doing so here in the US...

Extreamly yummy story an after thoughts

Tams

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Five thumbs up your arse!!!!!

You have quite the way with words my dear. Fascinating story although I suspect it is more your libidinous fantasy than fact. Your knowledge of Scotland does appear to be authentic. But you need private lessons (from me) regarding the sex. Yours, Carlton.

songman60songman60almost 19 years ago
Meet you at MacDonald's

Very well done, Sarahhh. I love your writing and your sense of humor. You are one hot lassie! Poor Hamish with the plaid dildo and all (I would prefer for you to use your finger on my rosebud). Anyways, I'll "meat" you at MacDonald's sometime.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Jaezus baby girl!

What an excellent depiction of the perfect fellatio! You almost made me cum without even touching me!

woodrowsmithwoodrowsmithalmost 19 years ago
very interesting, different for you Sarah

Sarah,

As usual your story is well written, erotic and imaginative. A true bone raiser as it were yet filled with imagery that brings the reader into the story. An example of erotica done by a real writer, not simply word porn.

You know dear, while Rat Trap was quite good, outside of this genre I would like to see you do something really worthy of your (literary) talent.

Jeff

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Defo

Someone I'd like to see up the braes. ;)

David48David48almost 19 years ago
It'a a faire nicht tonicht!

I always did want to fuck a real Scott up his arse. I would prefer Sarah however! Funny and hotter than haggis. I give it five scones.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
scottish lass

Sarah can still write good, even across the pond in Scotland. Shes also the most fuckable wench in this hemisphere. If shed only realize how much she needs my cock...........

macrolover

nick1966_38nick1966_38almost 19 years ago
Long lost cousin

Great story Sarah I missed you I wanna be your long lost cousin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
More excitement for me

I dont know how one person can say this is your best so far. I think all of your stories are fantastic. Definitely one of the more classy writers on here. I do get to read them twice, once by myself and If I think that it is worthy I have a female friend that comes over and she gets off by listening to me narrate the stories to her while she does her thing to me so she gets the best of two worlds your literature and usually a mouthful from me keep up the good work it is fantastic and please do turn around luv ya Larry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Another winner

Great story (again) Sarah. A true one, huh? Wow! Is

> your next 1 true as well? I hope so. Here's a website you might be interested in: www.mobog.com Maybe see a new and different type of posting from you. Steve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Scot!

After that incredible adventure you should be crowned Queen of Scotland. The only thing missing from this story is Scotch tape to bind your "victims" while you wear the plaid off your fake dick. Very entertaining tale!

Luv ya,

Lucas

dew9876dew9876almost 19 years ago
Dawg Pound

Welcome back! Yet another great story! If you want to do some dogging during Football season you could bring your Sweet (Steelers Fan) Ass to Cleveland & visit the DAWG Pound!

michassmichassalmost 19 years ago
she asked...

Sarah requested a review and who am I to refuse? As usual for Sarahhh of the lovely boob, this story was full of clever repartee and even includes a poem. Unfortunately, except for the plaid strap-on, the second half of the story is a disappointment. The characters oddly loose their Scottish accents, and old clichés (more taste/less filling) turn up. Still, the story is certainly worth more of your time than 99.9% of the other stuff on this site.

BonaireBonairealmost 19 years ago
Love the Lube!

How nice of you to use some lube(smile)! Having seen your tits I must agree it might be worth a rectal exam from you for the opportunity to shoot off in your lovely mouth!

Bonaire

gar1079gar1079almost 19 years ago
Another winner

Another great story Sarah... As always exciting and I love reading yhem and keeping my hand busy. Keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
This is your best story yet

And I've read them all. I like the settings in far off places. But, I like the sex and humor even better! Your devoted fan, Duane

wolfarmywolfarmyalmost 19 years ago
Here doggy, doggy!

What makes your stories so very delightful is the fact that you are such a hot, sweet slut! If you can write them, you can do them!

RebelWolfRebelWolfalmost 19 years ago
Awesome

Hey there Sarah that was an awesome story. It is ashame we don't have dogging in the state I live in. If we did mmmmmm babe I would be more then happy to suck on your clit and make you cum.

melj2ndmelj2ndalmost 19 years ago
Would love to dog it with you babe.

A fun story with lots of fantasy sex. If the dowdy Scotts were as openly sexual as the dogging referred, they would be over run by colonialist's joining their fun. (I've reserved my plane ticket for next week to investigate for my self.) Sarah is my kind of lady.

Diablo69Diablo69almost 19 years ago
How hot you make the world!

Ahhh Sarahhhhh.. you manage to make the world so hot with your delicious stories, the warmth that is felt is too much to handle.. thank you for your wonderful words!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great story

Nice story Sarah. Would love to see some dogging, and be your cousin. Want to hear more of your stories.

tonykelly77tonykelly77almost 19 years ago
The Bitch is back

Hi Babe,yet another great story from the pen of No1.

Authoress.you seem to tackle all subjects with the

erotic touch.Keep up the great work.

craiggie501craiggie501almost 19 years ago
Spotted Dick

Ach Ney to you. Great adventure, getting some foreign dick is always good for European-US relations. I always prefer no Bush myself.

If you ever want to screw another Australian, you've got my number. I'm sure we're related if that helps turn you on.

craiggie501craiggie501almost 19 years ago
Spotted Dick

Ach Ney to you. Great adventure, getting some foreign dick is always good for European-US relations. I always prefer no Bush myself.

If you ever want to screw another Australian, you've got my number. I'm sure we're related if that helps turn you on.

menopawzmommamenopawzmommaalmost 19 years ago
I have had a Scottish Dick before ; )

I have had a Scottish dick before ; ) The dick I had was HUGE! It made me think all Scottish men were huge, until I read your story...they're just like the rest of the schmucks!!! ; )

Great work!!

johnbam1johnbam1almost 19 years ago
hey awesome

great stuff again dear im sorry if it took me sooo long

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Kudos

You definitely have the ability to weave a unique and sexy yarn that makes the reader wonder in horny angst what might be next. What's next? SFR

boese_amiboese_amialmost 19 years ago
Taste of Europe??

Loved the story, Schatzi. Nice to see the Americans getting a bit of European Culture. When i lived in Berlin, i had a GF who just LOVED giving me head in my car at an Autobahn Reststop. Germans call it Parkplatzsex....if ya google it you will be surprised what hits you get ,-)

keep it up sexy, and thanks for the pic...added it to my gallery of your photos *grin*

Marc, The Mad American

Mikey59833Mikey59833almost 19 years ago
corvette

What do you mean to forget the Corvette? Was it the 400 hp one? But, okay, I'll forget it for now. Sarah, how does one find cousins like you, Hamish and Morag? Dogging sure sounds like a perfect way to end a day after flying across the Atlantic. Where did you get the energy for all seven guys? And you're so sweet, even giving Hamish some prostate attention after all the attention your G-spot got. Such a kind and considerate cousin!

Thanks for writing!

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 19 years ago
Sarah, How wonderful dogging would be with you!

As always Sarah has me rock-hard, wanting more! Sarah's wild imagination could arouse a dead man!

I wish I were her cousin--

Great work again, Sarah!

ravenspeakravenspeakalmost 19 years ago
as always

As always, hard to get through a story by Sarah. No, wait. That's always hard through a story by Sarah.

Intellectual, funny and sensual. Would you like to meet the folks?

prop69prop69almost 19 years ago
Bitch in Heat makes me go into heat!

Another fantastic story from my favorite author. I had to read it again!

Can't wait for the Breastfeeding My Brother story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great story

Sarah, how do you keep coming (pun intended) up with great stories? I am heading out to the bushes, just wished I was where you are :) cp_d

PenquinmanPenquinmanalmost 19 years ago
oh my god i have to take my dog for a walk:)

and i have 2 dogs-i think i need to go to walk them by Sarah's -and i love sheepskin condoms-but you've brought a new life to walking my dogs -look forward to seeing you on a walk :)

ShadowX80ShadowX80almost 19 years ago
Sarah..very special writer ;-)

Sarah, i read "bitch in the heat" i loved it so much so did for "Big O for Britney" , personaly i think you're one of the best on this site, i just wish you focus a bit more on the romantic side, sex is great of course ;-) but emotions are important too for the sex to be perfect.

Keep up the good work ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
let me stow in your bags

wow sarah...my trip to germany was slightly different than your trip back to the home country. i'm not sure if i could handle two of you, like you and your cousin. but i sure would like to try. you always get the blood flowing to all the right places......keep it up, please.

tz

MatadoreMatadorealmost 19 years ago
Non stop sex, food, and foolery

Non stop sex, food, and foolery...our little gurl has graduated! What may we expect from the post graduate work? More research? She will have to push hard to keep this pace, but that is expected! Over the top, again. Where is that second book?

bigbone98bigbone98almost 19 years ago
Sarahh....mmmmmmmmmm

Sarahh, you are the sexiest writer onthis site....did iI mention that I'm part Scottish too. Hey maybe we are related........THAT would be great! Keep up these stories!!

bigeasye98

Nimrod15Nimrod15almost 19 years ago
Unbridled Sex

Sarah, I loved your story of unbridled sex. This young Sarah, has so much knowledge of the various variations of sexual debauchery. I wonder if she has copyrighted any of the positions and places, that she has dogged in???

siderophilesiderophilealmost 19 years ago
Once a Scott, Always a Scott

Delightful, delicious, back and dishing out more! Smooth skin and plot, Sarah, yovv doon it agin, lass!

steve9094steve9094almost 19 years ago
The best has returned

Welcome back. We missed reading the stories that turn you on and never turn you off.

erias616erias616almost 19 years ago
Vrey Nice!!!

As always, A hot story with plenty to rub to. Redheads with pale skin are always a turn-on for me! Thanks for the pic, and i hope to see much more!

EZPeterEZPeteralmost 19 years ago
My Favorite author does it again

Sarahhh uses humor and great descriptions of fucking to make wonderful stories. I really liked this one.

Gene

tinman69stinman69salmost 19 years ago
Sarah The Great!!!

Sarah, what can I say that hasn't already been said? You are a man's dream!!! A fantasy girl for all men!! If only 50% of the world's women were clones of you, there would be no war!!! We'd all be making love!!!!

Sarah, you are the hottest finest woman I have ever seen on the net, and there are no limits on what I might do to get to taste you just once!!! You are the girl of my dreams honey!!!

Great story, by the way!! Wish I were your cousin!!!

TyFzTyFzalmost 19 years ago
The Colors of sex...

I cannot say how much i enjoyed reading your latest story, This one was fun and naughty. You always make group sex/orgies to seem like a everyday thing. I thank you for letting me know when you post!

ljaljaalmost 19 years ago
your to much for me...

sarahhh... I told you already.. your to much for me... I love every thing you write... I masterbate to every story you write me... And it feels so good... t/y... Your Last Pic made me shoot really Hard and I was in Heaven... Larry...

prop69prop69almost 19 years ago
Hottest story this month! Another winner

Another fanatastic adventure for the most gorgeous redhead on the net!

My dick stayed hard the entier time!

freddylonglegfreddylonglegalmost 19 years ago
sarah hits gold

Sarah, you've done it again . . . and again, and again . . . So, where do we all sign up to see more of you, and read more of your work?!?

F-

carrolljcarrolljalmost 19 years ago
I love Sarah's Family...

and they love her too.Who wouldn't love and lust for this Scottish lass? The body of an angel and the mind of a Celtic wench. I've known this lass for years and continue to marvel at how she has blossomed. I marvel at those tits too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
extremely arousing

I loved it!!! you have outdone yourself once again sarah..i do love your incest tales...wish you would do more dad-daughter ones as well..your horny pilot cant wait to read them.

prop69prop69almost 19 years ago
You can ride my tartan anytime!

As a man with Scot heritage, Frazier, I loved the story. I played rugby for 11 years, but dogging is a sport that you should bring back to the states. Let me know and "I'll be in Pittsburg afore yee!"

Bshell

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Self Dogging

Sarah, since I must have led a sheltered life, I have never had the pleasure of dogging anyone. But I do have a mirror in my bedroom, that would serve the purpose. Cum, kneel, bend over, assume the position, and I will. take the opportunity to dog myself. Woof, woof.

nosefora10nosefora10almost 19 years ago
now you've done it!

as always, you captivate and hold my attention from srart to sexy finish. this is my favorite story now. i am irish, and if you ever want to plan a trip to ireland, just let me know darling......mack

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story

I thought it was well written and an excellent story. Of course the ultimate test it gave me a hardon that i had to stroke to completion. lol

SILVERTONGUE6469SILVERTONGUE6469almost 19 years ago
doggone great story

Loved the story. got me very hard imagining you dogging it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wow

I've read several of your other stories but this one is the best. Hot, funny, even educational. Can't wait until dogging comes to my neighborhood! Chip

Paul SawyerPaul Sawyeralmost 19 years ago
OMG

Ohhhh Sarahhh... lovely! What a way with words. I'm sitting here throbbing.. thinking of your lovely lips and tongue doing a Scottish jig on my cock. Paul

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
sweet Sarah

Sarah, this, like all your stories is my favorite. You would make any mans dreams come true.

RPBUSHRPBUSHalmost 19 years ago
AHHH

Once again Sarahhh, You have "risen" to the occasion, or at least I did. I was going to Italy this summer, but you make Scotland sound SOOO GOOOD. I would gladly become a rogger dogger, especially with you and your cousins. Well you made me smile, I just hope I put a little smile on your smile ;))

_RP

psychprof67psychprof67almost 19 years ago
Travelogues

Ahh Sarah, Somehow, I never pictured you as a travel writer, I see it all now, you writing travel tales and historical fiction, hordes of males, and more than a few females, reading them for the sex and inadvertantly learning something as well.. Welcome home and It is a provocative thought, picturing you in Scotland, my "homeland" too..

Psychprof

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Good story

It was a fun story. Thanks, welcome back.

FREEWIKKIFREEWIKKIalmost 19 years ago
THANKS FOR THE BIG ONE!

THIS IS WHAT HARD ONS ARE MADE OF! tHANKS A LOT, SO FAR AT 2 TIMES GETTING OFF AND i HAVE ONLY HAD THE STORY FOR 2 HOURS! PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!( AND NO i AM NOT YELLING, JUST VERY EXCITED!)

curious_mecurious_mealmost 19 years ago
sarahhh.............u heated me up sweety

Danm girl, that was something else. i definitely dig u and ur cousin morag. the story was really hot sarah and u kept me reading to find out what was next to cum. u made me wanna ccum in ur mouth too girl. HOOtt hot hothothot

Gaj

jes5438jes5438almost 19 years ago
Just Lovely

Sarah,

Once again your story was great. I would love to help you live out any of your stories. All of your stories are great.

James

WonderingXWonderingXalmost 19 years ago
once again

Well you did it again. No matter where you go the story is the same Unlimited sex in the wildest ways. I just don't know how you do it, BUT please don't ever stop. As always Sarah you keep everybody waiting to see what is going to happen next.Sort of like peeking around the corner. It's that up and at them, in your face sex that always gets us going. With your fan club you could run for mayor of Pittsburgh and win!!! A really great story and I can't wait to read your next one.On a rating system of floor, wall, or seiling, this goes over the top and reaches the ceiling. Thanks for keeping us happy and hard.!!!! Classicdreamer 55

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
said the magic words!!!

oh...gawd,you said the magic words! fucked his ass with a dildo...gotta get mine, now...and "submit" to it. Bet my hard cock won't last long...yummy story!!! Thanks! pity you're not here to plow me good....

rayfromjerseyrayfromjerseyalmost 19 years ago
sarahhh scores again

Sarah, you've gone and done it again. You've written a really hot story that was fun to read. Promise me that you won't ever stop writing. This is definitely a favorite

Bushido71XSBushido71XSalmost 19 years ago
Well....

Now we at least know what you've been upto all this time kiddo. ;-)

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