by Louise Brown
Goodness, she was a very bad girl, wasn't she? Definitely in need of that spanking... Great job, good luck in the contest!
I like a story with a good tongue lashing <grin> and a long....tail, I meant tale <smile> good luck (~_*)
Merry Christmas and Happy Turkey Day
Art~
just kidding....you write erotic content well, now good luck in the contest!
Sometimes it's good to be bad! Very good work, Louise. Good luck in the contest.
... in a good way! Happy holidays and good luck in the contest. ~Imp
fanning isn't helping, this was fantastic. Great Job. Good luck in the contest.
Yes, this story was well written and detailed, however it leaves many questions about their future together. Her activities and experiences have been many and varied, so is she going to be satisfied with just one man for the forseeale future? How will Mathew react to his discovery of her past, and yes, most likely it will come out, usually at the most inconvenient time.
So, for me, this story does well as a standalone story, yet there's also some part of me that would like to see a continuance.
What a great story! And those are so damn fine sexy legs, I wouldn't mind seeing the rest of you.