All Comments on 'Weeding/Wedding'

This is really a fun read and well written. Really enjoyed it. :)

reminded me of my garden. Some wonderful wordplay here, but somehow I picture you, out for a night on the town, decked out in formal attire, you reach your hand out to the beautiful lady (the sunflower) and her delicate fingers nestle into a stained and dirty gardening glove. Just an odd image... nice work.

jim : )

Wonderful, Sack! Thanks.

that needs to be weeded, I can hear your hummming while your 'weeding'.

This was a fun read with a great mix of frustration and truimph.. a subtle gardening of handling lifes roots lol..

Love it

du~

This was a fun read! Naming, specifically, all those plants... very nice touch. Too many times, writers just say "grass" or "tree" or "bush"... (like me! yikes!)

and thoughts similiar to my go postal piece. the characteristics of how yours is written (a bit subtler though)does remind me of the line movement in mine. i do believe that yours and mine show different solutions, but yet reach the same conclusions. you have a lot of imagery than i do with mine. nevertheless a wonder piece you have here.

Pretty much crapola. Sorry, dude, but this really doesn't do much for the average joe. I'm not one of the faithful five givers. (May they awaken one day from their mutual admiration society and realize that all their self stroking has brought nothing but solitary orgasms.)

the bridge i spot the troll. it appears to me that you didn't take a good look at those that did comment on this piece as they are respected writers of lit. that vote will not stand as it will be wiped off the charts. if this piece is crap as you say it is, i don't see anything constructive to shape it as you would like to see it be envisioned in your mind. where is that? I don't see any reason for the type of comment you left. this is a fine poem!!

struck me many ways ,

but the greatest part was...

it gave me options of which

it would pertain, and some

I thought to be utterly

... delicious !

*smile pretty*

-sGp-

Sorting through the various personalities, eliminating the less than desirable ~ left with a lone Sunflower to light the days. Beautiful!