by annaswirls
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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That was my personal favorite; almost a manifesto (always been a sucker for those). But in a way that has been the exception. Mostly it's s a collection of sensual images from every where - don't worry about cohesiveness, somehow it works!
reading as ever. I loved the imagery, esp in the second poem.
Congrats on the E, mentioned in today's new poem reviews
All three are good, to varying degrees, but the first poem should stand alone. The last two poems are like a tail dangling on a woman. Sure, a few people will get a thrill out of it, but most of them will find that the woman looks better without the tail... and the tail without the woman.