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by Cockyfox

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Welcome

to Lit. I enjoyed reading your first poem here. It has a good rythmn and your imagery has a sensual touch to it; I esp enjoyed the details you've put in; such as 'He has a voice like water'

Good stuff, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good to see you here!

Once you find your way it's easy.

Nice debut poem. Erotic and understated. I enjoyed it.

Tess

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