All Comments on 'The Choice'

by Du Lac

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sacksackover 19 years ago
Abnegate cravings?

That's a new one....loved this "delicious" poem.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Familiar feelings

written well. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Very good!

Muse or Warrior?

Both swim in my soul,

Time to chose,

This place I can not go....<--nice ending lines!

Trent_DutchTrent_Dutchover 19 years ago
New Poem Reviews

Your poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Review thread for Tuesday 8th of February.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Muse~

Only if the north and the south both ask for you to decide then you would have no alternative, but the one that say's "Explore your polars and do what the Du DO best. That would be my pick. Warriors are rough and off to battle leaving you in worried tears, a muse will surely make your face smile while the warrior probably fills your desires. <grin> The earth has a north and a south why can't you ???

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