All Comments on 'the art of becoming invisible'

good poem but it could be a bit better. mentioned on the review thread.

reminds me of my mother, the years before she passed. A haunting piece that pulled me in, even when I wasnt sure I wanted to go.

thank you eve for the tip: this poem was most definitely, enjoyed. A witty trail of words that strummed cords in the soul. Captivating poetry (~_~) Art~