- Erotic Poetry
- Taint
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You taint this body with unbidden, binding
tabletop thoughts. Spread out
a leisure morphing of partially taken pathways
teeth sinking bites, into the bountiful boudoir
of coy glances interceded in the exchanging
of secret blushes. I follow your patch
of sprinkling hair to the rivers edge, while I sup
and gather liquid courage to forgo it all
and just feast on you forever.
- COMMENTS
saw_man1over 17 years agoYour words paint vivd and evocative images.
Rhymeville must be quite a place.
Anonymousover 17 years agoGreat stuff, Heather, good use of imagery and your language has a nice musicality to it.
love and hugs
V/D
xx
My Erotic Trailover 17 years agonice write (~_~)definitely an excellent literary journey <grin you would win altmania with this write <grin, I had no idea it was your poem (~_*)
Man Rayover 17 years agowell-chosen, well-ordered ajectives/phrases; very seductive indeed! Nicely done!
champagne1982over 17 years agoThis is great and I love the allusion to an instant message conversation. You've made me hungry and I can't wait to feast on my bountiful spread.
GuiltyPleasureover 17 years ago.....love this poet for the strides she's made. This is simply lovely.
Tess
Bill Dadaover 17 years agoI don't really care for alliteration, despite that, this poem had me following it to 'rivers edge.' My favorite line is 'a leisure morphing of partially taken pathways,' though it seems like a coma after pathways might help.
BD
