All Comments on 'Sunset's Fall'

especially the last two lines. Nice flow. I'm thinking the collaborators are a male and female...but maybe, that's just cause i want to think that.

has been mentioned in fridays reviews

very fluid and entrancing

almost feel the yin and the yang

grasping one another to make one~

I mean this in a good way...

it was like, follow the bouncing ball in rythym

and a soothing yet emotional poem

images from the words were mystique

yet eroticly endearing

a pearl of a poem~

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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