by Remec
Oh I love it. I know this girl! Makes me long for summer again. Thanks for writing such a great poem to follow that line-- the poem made me really go back to when I wrote it, thank you, really.
I really like this poem, it made me smile thinking about my own experiences in berry patches... much the same as you've written here, Remec.
As the others commented. This reminded me of my berry picking days also, cept' well I did share,*grins*.. Loved this poem. Bright, witty, n sweet..Keep'm Comin~
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