All Comments on 'Still life with mockingbird'

though the first two stanzas are a bit too heavy on the adjectives.

... a mockingbird in reality but now I feel I have. Thank you steve.

This poem has been mentioned in the New Poems review thread over at the forum.

great poem~

lone star the one legged mockingbird

a very good friend of mine...

hehehe...inspirational...mystro!

loved the word 'birdartist.' Nicely done!

I have read on this site or any other site. I believe the numerous adjectives in the opening paragraphs were purposeful, and very powerful I might add. And for once, it is nice to read a poem that has no spelling errors or other structural problems. This ought to be used as a prototype of how to write an effective poem on Literotica. God bless you, Steve Porter!! (Gotta love those male poets!!)