All Comments on 'Smoke and Mirrors'

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Honey123Honey123about 18 years ago
:)

Your words always make me smile.

~Honey

TeeTeeTeeTeeover 18 years ago
Wow

Loved it

thanks for sharing

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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Not many people can overcome the dual fatality of a "bad" title and first line. You do. Only problem is it has to be read to see the relationship.

Advise, better title.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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It's one hell of a relationship here;

With its underlying theme

No wonder why the thought resonates,

"What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas."

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sexxyyy !!

I love your humor !!

Your sly and sneaky here

alomost begging to be played with.

Love it Liar.

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