by Sabina_Tolchovsky
Well done ~ I can feel the cold coming;
couldn't you have waited another month before posting this - Winter comes too fast up here in the North woods.
I like this poem, particularly these lines -
"Summer sheds her skin,
like an offering
to sleeping bones below." It works on several levels creating a mood and raising images of leafless trees.
Tess
Lightly laid words like fallen snow that touched the heart with warmth. Very nice read!