All Comments on 'Seventeen Seconds'

has been mentioned in todays reviews

interesting, noticeable differences in the

two poets and loved the encirclement~

nice poem~

Lovely. You compliment one another.

...so this is the long-awaited poem from the two of you, eh? Well, hon, it was worth the wait. I don't know how you managed to get the intensity...the sensuousness, that this poem conveys while writing separately, but it speaks volumes about both your talents. Very evocative.

Interesting play on the differences between the two styles. Combined to create a very erotic and evocative poem