by 4degrees
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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I love it !! Sexy, hot and very devotional in a poetic kinda way ~ *grins* Love the flow, and the imagery. I feel you here my friend and get it ... I so get it ~
Bravo on the E ...
Great to see you back, missed ya !!!
I suck
at math, too
love the attitude in this piece :D
congrats on the E, dear birthday buddy o' mine :D
This is a well earned E. Very nice flow and interesting phrasing, creating a intriguing image on a whole.
Well earned E! I love the last lines -
"....to bathe, before it fades
in the blinding light of bone-crushing
love i have for you. "
Any lover would swoon.
Tess
the poem begins to takeoff with "i suck at math"...dunno, might be a better starting point, but you got something here...thanks.
on the E
I like the images you painted in my mind, esp
'i suck at math
and can't define you in those
technical sex terms
that are strung together
by numbers instead of letters'
Thanks for the read