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by elbiscayne

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
what a

great memory.

and presented with just the right amount of nostalgia and tenderness.

Nice job

sacksackover 19 years ago
Pretty amazing

And much more convincing (to me anyway) than your "E" rated story. One couplet might have flowed better as follows:

"Now you can buy me drink and sit down next to me". Otherwise, pretty darn outstanding!

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Biography? All I have are lessons learned; usually the hard way, How would you know that it wasn't just another story in any case?