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sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
Everybody loves the beach.

I think you have laid this out well. Enough salt and

sand to glue this this thing together. I thought it

read well. Last verse was my fav.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Just Beachy

It washed over me. Loved-

hips rowing

pushing

distant shores

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