All Comments on 'Rewind|replay'

I wonder how it would look with spacing, so you get to the trail off

i.e. take the first two lines, make it one long one. And spacing to some of the other lines.

once-sung; you|me etc. etc.

I love it

- you're wacked, from someone that also writes wacked.

I love it

I used to use a trick

I took my pencil point

and jam jammed it in

as far as it would go,

and then spun it

around and around

until it wound up so tight

it begged for release

and then I would listen

for sweat sweet music to play

Smooth as a bucket of dry ice, stage left.

Fun poem!

Fly